Give Me Some Time
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saahir
2016/09/21 06:49
Let me know your wishes So that I may fulfill The promisses I made I promise not to leave you alone When tears flowing from your eyes And will make you laugh though suffering my heart with pain Wait a little while.. Let me free my nations Those who don't have roof over their heads Having no education suffering from hunger even lacks of all basic needs.. Then I'll turn to you And fulfill all your wishes Please wait my sweet smiley Give Me Some Time...!!!
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_SonIcGirL_
2016/09/21 06:54
Good smiley
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Kalpana
2016/09/21 07:22
Ditto sonicsmiley
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ABHIRAJ
2016/09/21 07:57
Tuff task.not so easy.nyc words..
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@RADHIKA @
2016/09/21 08:01
nice line
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ABHIRAJ
2016/09/21 14:00
PRINCESS SUNl: Wht to mean tuff task.ls lt tht easy to break a promise
its rather easy to break ur headsmiley smiley
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ArjunPratap
2016/09/21 14:30
nice one
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Kayli
2016/09/21 18:55
Excelent topic
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KingFISHER
2016/09/24 02:48
meaningful lines. Superb!
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THE_SPEAR_KING
2016/10/03 03:57
Patriotism comes first. smiley Nice words with great sense
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SONIC
2016/10/05 10:57
I loved it!
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jaQui
2017/11/09 18:52
Beautiful smiley
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jaQui
2017/11/09 23:30
Karma!!! smiley
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i_am_what_i_am
2017/12/28 22:18
Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.
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saahir
2018/01/02 05:17
i_am_what_i_am: Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.
But the next wave could be a chance to avail.
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i_am_what_i_am
2018/01/02 06:37
saahir: But the next wave could be a chance to avail.
Rivers dont have waves, only ripples
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saahir
2018/01/02 10:17
i_am_what_i_am: Rivers dont have waves, only ripples
tnx 4 info smiley
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i_am_what_i_am
2018/01/02 10:46
saahir: tnx 4 info smiley
My pleasure smiley
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Maryam
2018/05/27 15:51
Nice post Saahir but For how long can ur sweet smiley wait smiley
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saahir
2018/05/27 17:30
Maryam: Nice post Saahir but For how long can ur sweet smiley wait smiley
As long the problems could solved.
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Maryam
2018/05/27 20:57
saahir: As long the problems could solved.
Then I guess forever cuz these prblms Can't be solved cmpltly
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