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The Veil Of Sorrow

Shush14 · Jun 29, 2015 08:35 9 78
Shush14 OP
Jun 29, 2015 08:35
I pass beyond the veil of sorrow to knock on heaven's door. And see you waiting there for me across the distant shore. The waves retreat to crash again upon the darkened sand. I scream your name without a sound but just don't understand. I'm watching tears stream down your face and wish this nightmare through. I lived my life and also death and gave all my love to you. As thoughts run rampant in my mind and lights regress to dark. The pain I feel goes far beyond the depths within my heart. It reaches down into my soul and burns eternal flames. I whisper now forever more the mysteries of your name. Shall Death relieve my inner pain to torture me no more. As I pass beyond the veil of sorrow and knock on heaven's door..
9 replies
ABHIRAJ
Jun 29, 2015 09:04
#1
Beautifull poem..thnx 4 sharing
Sweetcapricorn
Jun 29, 2015 10:22
#2
its really heart touching poem dear shush..... you always share marvellous collection ....i really appreciate your effort ....
Barbiecute
Jun 29, 2015 14:27
#3
smiley
Shush14 OP
Jun 29, 2015 17:50
#4
thanks rida smiley
Shush14 OP
Jun 29, 2015 17:51
#5
kya hua sweetu ?
Lil wayne
Jun 30, 2015 08:20
#6
smiley
Marlou
Jul 19, 2015 11:56
#7
Absolutely good one smiley
Georginia
Jul 20, 2015 10:03
#8
Good one
Shush14 OP
Aug 7, 2015 20:32
#9
thanks everyone..