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Lost in Desert

saahir · Jun 2, 2014 12:19 31 174
saahir OP
Jun 2, 2014 12:19
I fell in smiley.. She was lovely.. Innocent enough.. So cute.. So beautiful.. Having kind smiley.. Soft spoken.. But.. I lost her.. Once she found me.. Talking with a girl.. Hugging her.. Kissing her.. She also kissed my forehead.. Good bye brother.. She waved her hand.. Tears like pearls appeared in her eyes.. I turned back to my sweet heart.. But she was not there.. She left me forever.. In desert of her doubt..
31 replies
Tochi Prudence
Sep 24, 2014 15:41
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saahir: Thanks Tochi dear smiley
You r most welcm dear
Tochi Prudence
Sep 24, 2014 15:42
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saahir: Thanks Tochi dear smiley
You r most welcm dear
Tochi Prudence
Sep 24, 2014 15:43
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saahir: Thanks Tochi dear smiley
You r most welcm dear
saahir OP
Sep 24, 2014 17:15
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Tochi Prudence: If she is really urs, she wil definatly come back 2 u frnd.
Its secret dear smiley
Barbiecute
Sep 24, 2014 17:54
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omg vei touching poem smiley
mk_alyana
Sep 24, 2014 21:32
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she left u? Bit her head,. Nice composition,,perfect
Tochi Prudence
Sep 25, 2014 02:00
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saahir: Its secret dear smiley
Really? now i undrstnd....
_SnOwBoY_
Sep 28, 2014 12:35
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Gud poem yup..
blueprince012
Sep 30, 2014 03:46
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This is amazing! I like this poem
Smarty
Jan 24, 2016 20:42
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Where did you lose your in Desert ?
karthikrk
Feb 18, 2017 11:47
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oh!
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