Will You Marry Me..?
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saahir
2013/05/01 15:08
Will you marry me? I'm not handsome, I'm not rich, Neither I have banglow, Nor having car, But loving & caring, A resposible person, Respecting, giving honour, Most humble, Knowing value of a marriage tie, And promissing to fulfill, All my duties towads it, Till my last breath.. I promise, I'll share All my pleasures, All my sorrow with you, I promise to share, All my hidden, All my open, I'll enjoy with your pleasures I'll share all your pains, I'll not let you cry, Always I'll walk beside you, Never leave you alone, Give me your hand, And hold my hand, I pledge to abide All responsibilities of marriage tie.. Give me your hand, And hold tightly my hand, "This poem is written on a request of my beloved sister, Princess_Soniya."
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Thapasya
2017/08/24 08:47
Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...
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saahir
2017/08/24 09:33
Thapasya: Saahir ,new generations never accept ur proposal as described by u, only some exceptional cases may be there...This is the truth...
Thanks again for correcting me. I'll try to become rich nowsmiley
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Milisha
2017/08/24 12:20
Very nice poem smiley
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Maryam
2017/08/24 17:02
hmm.. This sounds ROMANTIC 💑
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@Don@
2018/06/23 06:21
,-gone-
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~shiroz~fa
2019/05/06 01:27
I cantsmiley
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saahir
2019/05/07 15:52
~shiroz~fa: I cantsmiley
But why?
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Coookie
2019/05/24 23:01
Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u smiley
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saahir
2019/05/26 19:52
Coookie: Yes yes yes, it's a nice poem. but sorry, i can't marry u smiley
Nice joke smiley
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David.adams
2019/05/29 21:14
Nice
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Maryam
2019/05/29 22:52
saahir: Dreams never come true.... smiley
That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe
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Maryam
2019/05/29 22:53
izac: True words of promise.
Only if the promise is not broken
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saahir
2019/05/29 23:03
Maryam: That's a myth but Dreams do come true u just need to believe
naughty smiley
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Maryam
2019/05/29 23:07
saahir: naughty smiley
only naughty with Saahir smiley
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saahir
2019/05/29 23:51
Maryam: only naughty with Saahir smiley
smileysmiley
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Tweetums
2019/06/08 06:03
This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
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~shiroz~fa
2019/06/11 15:37
smiley hmm
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Milisha
2019/06/21 03:15
Yes! hold my hand tightly smiley
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saahir
2019/06/22 04:11
Milisha: Yes! hold my hand tightly smiley
smiley
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zugzwang
2019/06/25 12:02
Tweetums: This is a lovely poem. It's easy read and it shares a beautiful message.
good, I thought its serious matter
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