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Promise

saahir · Sep 26, 2012 13:01 27 222
saahir OP
Sep 26, 2012 13:01
Moon was disapeared some where far of the ocean it was a dark night and I was waiting I looked a glance in the sky stars were teasing me frogs some where in dark laughing at my folly but I was confident I laid down on sand bed I dint remember when slumber covered me up I opened my eyes when some rays of rising sun fell on me It was her last promise she failed to fulfil it
27 replies
jaQui
Sep 26, 2012 13:08
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? Very nice
jamella16
Sep 26, 2012 14:36
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very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
-Marizelle-
Sep 26, 2012 14:43
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Nice poem saahir
aprillia
Sep 26, 2012 15:16
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nice poem.
The_Torpid
Sep 26, 2012 15:18
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Nice one bro karma 4 u.
Manal
Sep 26, 2012 16:48
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nice postsmiley
Terry
Sep 26, 2012 17:06
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nice btw its sad smiley
Trax
Sep 27, 2012 09:12
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Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Hareesh
Sep 28, 2012 04:48
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Beautiful poem nice well topic
mary
Oct 26, 2012 19:03
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nice this one..good!
trakkerterrorist
Oct 26, 2012 19:06
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this words take me thinking
MAHESH_K
Oct 27, 2012 18:35
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Nice 1 bro smiley
Meer@.gupta
Oct 27, 2012 18:41
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princess_nisha: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poem
Appe
Oct 27, 2012 18:46
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Oh that's really nice
Sandal
Oct 27, 2012 18:51
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Meer@.gupta: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. smiley
nandupk61
Oct 28, 2012 01:05
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Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
_Ritesh rockx_
Oct 28, 2012 01:52
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Gud
Thapasya
Oct 28, 2012 03:20
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nice keep it up
suny33
Oct 28, 2012 03:27
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Hjmgj
Fantasy
Oct 28, 2012 18:26
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nice poem