Moon was disapeared
some where far of the ocean
it was a dark night
and I was waiting
I looked a glance in the sky
stars were teasing me
frogs some where in dark
laughing at my folly
but I was confident
I laid down on sand bed
I dint remember
when slumber covered me up
I opened my eyes when
some rays of rising sun fell on me
It was her last promise
she failed to fulfil it
Promise
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? Very nice
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
Nice poem saahir
nice poem.
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
nice post
nice btw its sad 
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Beautiful poem
nice
well topic
nice this one..good!
this words take me thinking
Nice 1 bro 
princess_nisha: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poemOh that's really nice
Meer@.gupta: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer.
Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
nice keep it up
Hjmgj
nice poem