"PAIN"

aprillia

Sep 22, 2012 22:36

beautiful sad poem. smiley

KingFISHER

Sep 23, 2012 03:03

stand up frnd and start to rebuild ur life again.

jamella16

Sep 23, 2012 16:15

happiness is tempo and so is pain. Just pick up urself and stand up. Everything will be alright smiley

Hold my hand, come close to me, I am waiting, some one will come, I don't know, from where and when, she will enter in my life, and will fill the vacuum, making place in my heart, and will change my empty life

saahir

Sep 23, 2012 17:34

Hold my hand, come close to me, I am waiting, some one will come, I don't know, from where and when, she will enter in my life, and will fill the vacuum, making place in my heart, and will change my empty life

GITA_RS

Sep 23, 2012 17:54

Nice but very sad.. smiley

Fantasy

Sep 24, 2012 15:41

Heart touching...

Hareesh

Sep 28, 2012 05:07

Yes frnd u r ryt lv is life gud topic

Hareesh

Sep 29, 2012 16:04

Thanks a lot

saahir

Oct 10, 2012 13:19

The pain with I suffer Is not a pain of distances You are still close to me Yes, very close in my heart, I feel your existance When I close my eyes I feel your smooth touches When I smell your gifts I'm alive with your memories I'm alive with the ways we walked I'm alive with your gifts I'm alive with my heart beats Which always sings your song Which takes your name But when I open my eyes I see me, I'm "ALONE"..

-Marizelle-

Oct 10, 2012 13:23

So beautiful poem

Manal

Oct 10, 2012 13:25

wonderful

KingFISHER

Oct 10, 2012 13:28

saahir: The pain with I suffer Is not a pain of distances You are still close to me Yes, very close in my heart, I feel your existance When I close my eyes I feel your smooth touches When I smell your gifts I'm alive with your memories I'm alive with the ways we walked I'm alive with your gifts I'm alive with my heart beats Which always sings your song Which takes your name But when I open my eyes I see me, I'm "ALONE"..

just outstanding written!