I love you 'O' my Mom
95 replies
Avatar
saahir
2012/03/08 14:32
I love you 'O' my Mom As much I love my God I remember you As much I remember my God I remember once I was hungry I ask you for food You gave me a cup of milk with piece of bread I looked at your face You read some line on my forehead You smiled & said "Eat my child" You pointed your finger towards cooking vessels Both were covered with lids I finished my breakfast You went out I removed the lids Both vessels were EMPTY I cried in a sky breaking voice 'O' My God
Avatar
saahir
2012/04/09 05:54
Male1974: nice story..really poetic.
these lines are from my true life story.
Avatar
saahir
2012/04/09 06:01
Both poems are from lines of my true story.
Avatar
Amywilliam
2012/04/09 06:30
touchy
Avatar
cmail
2012/04/09 06:45
saahir: I love you'O' my MomAs muchI love my GodI remember youAs much I remember my GodI remember once I was hungryI ask you for foodYou gave me a cup of milk with piece of breadI looked at you faceYou read some line on my foreheadYou smiled & said "Eat my child"You pointed your finger towards cooking vesselsBoth were covered with lidsI finished my breakfastShe went outI removed the lidsBoth vessels were EMPTYI cried in a sky breaking voice'O' My God
hearts touching poem yes in this world mom is mom nothing to be comparison no one can't replace her.her place above the god.... this poem above all poem my karma for it
Avatar
Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/09 07:36
saahir: I love you 'O' my mom As much I love my God I remeber When I was in need to pay My school fees You went to money lender You mortgaged your ornaments And I paid my school fees I remember Your eyes were flooded with tears In gratitute to Almighty God I remember the way You saved my carrier l love you 'O' my mom As much I love my God
Heart touching great mom smiley
Avatar
Sweetcapricorn
2012/04/09 09:30
smiley nice poem i like itsmiley thanx for sharing.
Avatar
Rosay
2012/04/12 04:05
senty
Avatar
Shush14
2012/04/12 11:31
awesome poem..
Avatar
Misty
2012/04/14 15:42
I think its brilliant especailly 4 payin tribute 2 the most important person in ur life the 1 person who helped gav u life. Words of truth spoken here.
Avatar
Manal
2012/04/16 06:08
i missed my momsmiley
Avatar
TemPEST
2012/04/16 22:33
Always it man
i love u mum
Avatar
saimmaz
2012/04/17 18:32
nice n touchy
Avatar
Itysam12
2012/04/25 08:32
Tanx for dat
Avatar
aprillia
2012/04/25 11:54
mama smiley in my bday w/o u. n this post make me more smiley smiley
Avatar
SoftwareboY
2012/04/30 17:55
Karma for princess_nisha
Avatar
FatimaAwan
2012/05/01 07:02
I love my mama toooo much
Avatar
Mace_Seiler
2012/05/01 12:46
Mom, lovya lots
Avatar
nehapatel
2012/05/02 05:30
Vewi touching hun!!
Avatar
Priya_sharma
2012/05/02 05:41
Good 1
Avatar
saahir
2012/05/02 20:45
princess_nisha: The m0ther t0pic is vry em0ti0nal 4me.and bhai this is beautifulsmileyn0 m0ther n0 life
Thnx sis u hv read it b4.
#53 Creative Work
Poetry, stories, lyrics, quotes, life lessons and more. Prepare to be moved and inspired.
Forums
Home