In those lake-deep eyes

22 replies

dad_ash

2011/09/13 12:59

I have published this urdu poem here at 2wap,s forums and got very good response from the urdu speaking community. However those who doesn't understand urdu, were up with complaint for a translation. I have tried to translate it literally, rather than wordly, so it become a complete poem, in the very same theme . I can easily pronounce it as a english version. Now read again urdu and then english version. I hope you will enjoy it, mind you that the original beauty of poetry can not be transfered in any other language. . . -*************** . . . - Un jheel si gehri ankhon main, Ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho , Us jheel kinaaray pal do pal, Ik khawaab ka neela phool khilay Wo phool baha dain lehron main, Ik roz kabhi hum shaam dhalay, Uss phool kay behtay rangon main Jis waqt laraztaa chaand chalay, Uss waqt kahin un ankhon main, Uss basray pal ki yaad to ho, Un jheel si gehri ankhon main, Ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho, Phir chahay zeest samandar ki Har maoj preshaan ho jaaye, phir chahay aankh dareechay say Har khawaab guraizaan ho jaaye Phir chahay phool kay chehray ka Har dard numayaan ho jaaye, Uss jheel kinaray pal do pal , Wo roop-nagar iijaad to ho Din raat kay iss aaieenay say Woh aks kabhi aazaad to ho, Un jheel si gehri ankhon main ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho. . . . .

dad_ash

2011/09/13 13:00

"In those, Lake-deep eyes, shall an evening Come to dies... Even though, For a minute or two, Blooming a dream flower of blue , Setting it then, On the waves through, Somewhere down the night, Colouring up bright, When the trembling Moon gets low, In order to flow, And to crystalize the moment, In those eyes, To remember something For the lonesome life. . . In those, lake-deep eyes, Star shines Sunrise.... Then doesn't matter if every wave, Gotto be go away for ever, Would be saved Or every dream, From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . . but once 0n the bank of those lake deep eyes, Shall uprise, The world of beau To free the reflections true, For a minute or two In those lake deep eyes. shall an evening come to live!"

Insenus_AmoR

2011/09/13 13:12

As_Ash: "In those, Lake-deep eyes, shall an evening Come to live... Even though, For a minute or two, Blooming a dream flower of blue , Setting it then, On the waves through, Somewhere down the night, Colouring up bright, When the trembling Moon gets low, In order to flow, And to crystalize the moment, In those eyes, To remember something For the lonesome life. . . In those, lake-deep eyes, Star shines Sunrise.... Then doesn't matter if every wave, Gotto be go away for ever, Would be saved Or every dream, From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . . but once 0n the bank of those lake deep eyes, Shall uprise, The world of beau To free the reflections true, For a minute or two In those lake deep eyes. shall an evening come to live!"

dad_ash

2011/09/13 13:17

Reading *tembling* moon// thanks afaque bhai-flower-

EpIcInCoGnItO

2011/09/13 13:50

Great composition. Well done.

dad_ash

2011/09/13 13:55

Thank you prince*karma*

Basim360

2011/09/13 14:06

Bro, funTasTiC

scarllete

2011/09/13 14:21

i like it..... smiley

very nice one.... smiley

dad_ash

2011/09/13 16:43

Thanks basim and Scarlette *karmax2* smiley

MaNmoJi

2011/09/13 17:08

Nice work...well done!

sassie

2011/09/13 17:20

nice paste

dad_ash

2011/09/13 17:39

Thx manmoji*karma*

dad_ash

2011/09/13 17:42

_andrea_: nice paste

the urdu poem is written by dr Abrar omar, literal translation is mine!

Lelsi

2011/09/13 18:06

Really nice poem bro smiley

keep up your good work

dad_ash

2011/09/13 19:40

Thanks letsi*karma*

jaQui

2011/09/13 19:52

beautiful my friend smiley

LoneLy_heArt

2011/09/14 03:01

As_Ash: "In those, Lake-deep eyes, shall an evening Come to dies... Even though, For a minute or two, Blooming a dream flower of blue , Setting it then, On the waves through, Somewhere down the night, Colouring up bright, When the trembling Moon gets low, In order to flow, And to crystalize the moment, In those eyes, To remember something For the lonesome life. . . In those, lake-deep eyes, Star shines Sunrise.... Then doesn't matter if every wave, Gotto be go away for ever, Would be saved Or every dream, From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . . but once 0n the bank of those lake deep eyes, Shall uprise, The world of beau To free the reflections true, For a minute or two In those lake deep eyes. shall an evening come to live!"

if nature poem?? The sun is is in the heavens & life on earth.... Flowers in the valley... splendor in the beam... Health on the gale& freshness in the stream.....why?????