Probably this topic should be in Lyrics City or Dolphins Cry,but i doubt since is a quite dark story.
So enjoy if u like it!
*oh and never turn your back!
THE RIPPER
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#1 You're in for surprise
You're in for a shock
In London Town streets
When there's darkness and fog
When you least expect me
And you turn your back
I'll atack
I smile when i'm sneaking
Through shaddows by the wall
I laugh when i'm kreeping
But you wont hear me at all
All hear my warning
Never turn your back
On the ripper
You'll soon shake with fear
Never knowing if i'm near
I'm sly and i'm shameless
Nocturnal and nameless
Except for the ripper
Or if you like jack the knife
Any back alley street
Is where we'll probably meet
Underneath a gas lamp
Where the air's cold and danp
I'm a nasty surprise
I'm a devil in disquise
I'm a footstep at night
I'm a scream of the fright
All hear my warning
Never turn your back
On the ripper
(by Judas Priest)
#2 I was thinking about putting it in dolphincry as its a nice dark poem like one, but its pretty dark words so its better suited for the darkworld lol. Well i must say i like how you put the dark words. Nice one 
#3 Yeh nice one 
#4 I like this... e0w !
#5 How many times r u willing to move this topic again over and over? 
#6 wonderful
#7 AGONYandEXTASY: You're in for surprise
You're in for a shock
In London Town streets
When there's darkness and fog
When you least expect me
And you turn your back
I'll atack
I smile when i'm sneaking
Through shaddows by the wall
I laugh when i'm kreeping
But you wont hear me at all
All hear my warning
Never turn your back
On the ripper
You'll soon shake with fear
Never knowing if i'm near
I'm sly and i'm shameless
Nocturnal and nameless
Except for the ripper
Or if you like jack the knife
Any back alley street
Is where we'll probably meet
Underneath a gas lamp
Where the air's cold and danp
I'm a nasty surprise
I'm a devil in disquise
I'm a footstep at night
I'm a scream of the fright
All hear my warning
Never turn your back
On the ripper
(by Judas Priest)
nyc poem
#8 good one
#9 scary huh 
#10 good one though
#11 Good to read twice or more.
#12 Saviola: Good to read twice or more.
Yep.
#13 black metal song?
#14 me_against_myself: black metal song?
Not quite is a good old heavy metal melodrama from '70s with fantastic solos and vocal. 
#15 Yeh nice one
#16 wow!