My Only Wish
34 replies
Maryam
Nov 24, 2017 15:30
If I could have just one wish,
I will wish to wake up to
The smell of your breath on my neck,
The warmth of your lips on my cheeks,
The touch of your fingers on my skin,
The feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that
Feeling with anyone other than you.
Sarcastic
Nov 24, 2017 15:49Thats heavenly wishes..
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 15:57excellent composition.
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 15:58you are a good poet 
Maryam
Nov 24, 2017 16:03Thanks 💮
Maryam
Nov 24, 2017 16:04Good poet is u.. I'm learning 4rm u saahir
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 18:09 Maryam: Good poet is u.. I'm learning 4rm u saahir
No dear we have many here who's poetry skills are better than me. We have PRINCESS SUNI, Lelsi, our admin jaQui madame , Abhiraj and many more by whom I'm inspired and trying to follow their tracks.
Sarcastic
Nov 24, 2017 18:30 saahir:
No dear we have many here who's poetry skills are better than me. We have PRINCESS SUNI, Lelsi, our admin jaQui madame , Abhiraj and many more by whom I'm inspired and trying to follow their tracks.
u forgot to mention my name..
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 18:35
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 19:28I've mentioned only the names about whom people are unknown. You are a shining star, every one knows you brother.
Sarcastic: u forgot to mention my name..
Sarcastic
Nov 24, 2017 19:30Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
saahir
Nov 24, 2017 19:40 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
Its not true I've read your topics, also the comments. How can you say that, no one knows u.
tRuEbLuE
Nov 25, 2017 22:17 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
Anyone can tell
They know you well
Lelsi
Nov 28, 2017 18:37 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
I believe I know you very well
Sarcastic
Nov 29, 2017 02:12 Lelsi:
I believe I know you very well
U r always offline.. 
ABHIRAJ
Dec 2, 2017 14:49may god bring your wish true
..nice poem,keep posting frnd
..nice poem,keep posting frnd
saahir
Jun 25, 2018 18:49 Sarcastic: U r always offline..
after your comment I found her online.
jaQui
Jun 25, 2018 22:42
Beautiful 
Maryam
Jun 26, 2018 05:20 saahir:
after your comment I found her online.
Yeah She's online Saahir 
Maryam
Jun 26, 2018 05:20 jaQui:
Beautiful
Thank you JaQui 
krack
Sep 25, 2019 00:14Beautiful Lines 
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