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"One Dark Night"

-LILY- · Jul 12, 2014 20:18 14 93
-LILY- OP
Jul 12, 2014 20:18
One dark night she ran away Over the hills, she didn't want to stay She ran from the pain, from the tears in her heart The tears that she cried because her love fell apart An impossible love, but she could not accept. Now she is drowning in the dark pool of death. Swimming and crying but there is no other side She's looking and searching for someone to be her guide Drowning and praying for some kind of cure She keeps thinking about the one that once loved her But he's far away and will never know And she'll never tell, 'cause she's afraid to show She falls asleep in the arms of Death, with His silent kiss he takes her final breath. Now she's in heaven, but she still remembers the pain The pain that left a scar on her soul, that one dark night in the rain....... smiley
14 replies
saahir
Jul 12, 2014 23:15
#1
Painful.
saahir
Jul 12, 2014 23:20
#2
Beautiful lines.
_ShAnE_StArK_
Jul 13, 2014 03:25
#3
Very painful...smiley
RiC_L
Jul 13, 2014 06:31
#4
Painful .... but beautiful.
parvez786
Jul 13, 2014 09:25
#5
very nice and sad story.
@Moon_boy@
Jul 13, 2014 11:20
#6
yeah love hurts
Na1m
Jul 17, 2014 11:21
#7
i am .......
NAASH
Jul 19, 2014 01:29
#8
Really wonderful lines.. It touches heartsmiley Ace topic smileysmiley
ChocolateHero
Sep 6, 2014 17:07
#9
Sad
nandupk61
Sep 7, 2014 03:03
#10
Fiction composition,good
_SonIcGirL_
Sep 8, 2014 05:20
#11
Beautiful but painful
Haseeb
Sep 30, 2014 18:11
#12
So sad smiley
wiLLyRockz
Oct 1, 2014 09:20
#13
.cry-
_.KaRaN._
Oct 1, 2014 15:16
#14
SADO BUT TOUCHED