"One Dark Night"
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-LILY-
2014/07/12 20:18
One dark night she ran away Over the hills, she didn't want to stay She ran from the pain, from the tears in her heart The tears that she cried because her love fell apart An impossible love, but she could not accept. Now she is drowning in the dark pool of death. Swimming and crying but there is no other side She's looking and searching for someone to be her guide Drowning and praying for some kind of cure She keeps thinking about the one that once loved her But he's far away and will never know And she'll never tell, 'cause she's afraid to show She falls asleep in the arms of Death, with His silent kiss he takes her final breath. Now she's in heaven, but she still remembers the pain The pain that left a scar on her soul, that one dark night in the rain....... smiley
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saahir
2014/07/12 23:15
Painful.
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saahir
2014/07/12 23:20
Beautiful lines.
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_ShAnE_StArK_
2014/07/13 03:25
Very painful...smiley
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RiC_L
2014/07/13 06:31
Painful .... but beautiful.
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parvez786
2014/07/13 09:25
very nice and sad story.
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@Moon_boy@
2014/07/13 11:20
yeah love hurts
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Na1m
2014/07/17 11:21
i am .......
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NAASH
2014/07/19 01:29
Really wonderful lines.. It touches heartsmiley Ace topic smileysmiley
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ChocolateHero
2014/09/06 17:07
Sad
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nandupk61
2014/09/07 03:03
Fiction composition,good
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_SonIcGirL_
2014/09/08 05:20
Beautiful but painful
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Haseeb
2014/09/30 18:11
So sad smiley
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wiLLyRockz
2014/10/01 09:20
.cry-
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_.KaRaN._
2014/10/01 15:16
SADO BUT TOUCHED
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