Thirsty Lips
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saahir
2014/02/06 16:38
Thirst of smiley.. Made my lips thirsty.. Waiting.. Waiting.. And waiting.. My search.. Never ends.. Though I'm tired.. Am I searching.. Water in desert.. No heart feels my pain.. No ear listens my cry.. Am I shouting in desert.. Am I shouting in no man's land.. Thirsty are my lips.. Thirsty is my smiley..
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KingFISHER
2014/02/06 16:43
Hope soon you wlll found the water source. Best of luck!
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Crownstar
2014/02/06 16:50
don't worry, the pirates map will direct u to the water source best of luck with ur compass .thumbsup.
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-LILY-
2014/02/06 17:12
nice...... smiley
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Naaz
2014/02/06 17:24
Oh ho soo sad mr.thirsty ,wish ur desire 'll fulfill soon .
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Kayli
2014/02/06 17:37
Very nice frnd smiley
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jaQui
2014/02/06 17:51
Thirsty lips n hungry heart,,smiley nice poem
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NIGHT_ANGEL
2014/02/06 18:05
so nicesmileyheart touching feelings in desertsmiley
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-Marizelle-
2014/02/06 19:33
Beautiful poem ">saahirsmiley
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Aita
2014/02/06 20:03
Well done.. Its lovely
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_NiGhTmArE_aNgEl_
2014/02/07 04:38
So nicesmiley
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Trax
2014/02/07 06:34
niiccee
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Georginia
2014/02/07 13:14
Nice lines brosmiley
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ladyme
2014/02/07 18:31
Those who seek will find. Nice poem saahir
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The_Torpid
2014/02/21 19:25
Wait for the Rain bro..... .romance.
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roza
2014/02/21 20:00
Really
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saahir
2014/02/21 20:04
roza: Really
Yes, itz.
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roza
2014/02/21 20:05
See my profile pic....its also a thirsty lips.....hmmmm
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saahir
2014/02/21 20:15
roza: See my profile pic....its also a thirsty lips.....hmmmm
really..
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roza
2014/02/21 20:18
saahir: really..
Ya doesn't Looks???
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saahir
2014/02/21 20:19
roza: Ya doesn't Looks???
I feel it2.
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