Slowly But Surely Falling IN LOVE
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Rohan786
2014/01/28 13:29
Never before did I believe That love could ever be real A myth another fairy tale A forgotten dream Was all it was to me But as I stare into your eyes And you press your lips against mine My heart stutters in my chest My breath catches in my throat In your arms I let myself fall So heartbroken so alone was I Condemning myself to my believed fate Afraid to feel, terrified to hurt You tore down these sacred walls Stealing away my heart Never did I notice it missing For never once did I feel it beat As it lay yours in your hands Never did I hear my laugh a little louder While you were the cause These words cannot compare To all that I feel for you I smile bigger and laugh harder My eyes shine brighter Reflecting the care I feel for you My heart beats a little faster At the thought of you Fireflies fill my stomach At your mere touch I'm falling for you more each day And when you're lost and alone Listen in the background Hear my voice Listen to me whisper I'm falling in love with you
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-LILY-
2014/01/28 13:45
oh wow beautiful poem rohan ...
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aksy
2014/01/30 07:44
nice feelings
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Rohan786
2014/01/30 08:33
Thanks aksy
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Rohan786
2014/01/30 08:33
.thanku. Lily
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Kayli
2014/01/30 10:27
smiley beautiful
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Princess_of_Love
2014/01/30 11:49
Lovely .
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Crownstar
2014/01/30 12:55
tanx
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unitedbby
2014/01/30 16:48
Nice, but dnt think i will ever fall in luv again
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ssali.ivan
2014/01/30 18:27
~LILY~: oh wow beautiful poem rohan ...
LILY~DO YOUR LOVE ME ...
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dellie
2014/01/30 18:52
Beautiful my friend.
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goodluckforu
2014/01/31 02:18
The lines of a verse germinates seeds of love & make it feel too. But love in real sense has to cover a long distance in its journey of life. We fail to understand it & maintain it likewise. If two loving-hearts keep it, it's really a matter of compliment. But sorry to say that love in modern age has become simply a few words to say cheaply but neither to feel it nor to keep it. It changes from morning to evening. May be the world of love blessed by God but we humane-beings have wasted its true value ! Thanks.
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Hareesh
2014/01/31 02:38
Hemmm 9ice
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TinHeart
2014/01/31 05:48
Congratulations for the beautiful poem.Hope you truelly found love!
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dellie
2014/01/31 07:09
Beautiful as always
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PINACLE
2014/01/31 07:45
That is ok very nice
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Tinky
2014/01/31 11:59
Wow nice poem
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Tochi Prudence
2014/01/31 13:34
Bravo!
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Saiyah
2014/02/01 11:39
..smiley.
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Rohan786
2014/02/01 12:41
Thanks Tochi
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Rohan786
2014/02/01 12:42
Thanks Tinky
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