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A dream!

_Sid_ · Nov 26, 2012 10:25 10 51
_Sid_ OP
Nov 26, 2012 10:25
Wake up, Im still awake! Watching u flutter ur eyes,seeing an imaginary realm! Reading ur thoughts,as u feel ur dream! Its nothing but a dreary path,which u think will last! The fruitless schemes of ur future,weighing on the past! U r ur dream's hero,twisting,turning and dodging! U got no idea that someone,through n through,is watching! Pray,whine,rush,let ur soul scatter! But in the end,it duznt even matter! Wake up, U will realise! That all ur life is just a dream,beautiful,bittersweet and wild! Wake up, relax! After all,u r just a child!smiley
10 replies
-Marizelle-
Nov 26, 2012 10:54
#1
Excellent poem friend
saahir
Nov 26, 2012 12:13
#2
Awakening!
Meer@.gupta
Nov 26, 2012 12:23
#3
Nice poem frd
Kumz
Nov 26, 2012 13:01
#4
Wow!! smiley
EllaiZa
Nov 26, 2012 13:55
#5
absolutely amazing.! somewhere in the lines it brings the message of realization and to live every moment of life to the fullest..
Fantasy
Nov 26, 2012 16:27
#6
Very good poem ....
trakkerterrorist
Nov 26, 2012 17:15
#7
great stup smiley
Hikaru
Nov 26, 2012 18:57
#8
Wow impressive!smileyi like it
Marlou
Nov 27, 2012 09:02
#9
Great!smiley enjoy every m0ment of your life. Just dance with the music.smiley
-linda-
Dec 19, 2012 03:09
#10
keep it up. nice