"PAIN"
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saahir
2012/09/22 18:39
Love is pain now in my life, days I remember, I passed with you, Since my childhood, as I remember, always we use to play together, As I remember, I act husband, and you as my wife, As the days passed, distances came in between, you got engaged with some one, I cried for you, but my cry was lost, non heard it, and you got married, I remained alone, with your memories, and with my pain
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aprillia
2012/09/22 22:36
beautiful sad poem.smiley
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jaQui
2012/09/23 00:27
!Awsome poem
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Trax
2012/09/23 02:00
Nice sad poem smiley
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KingFISHER
2012/09/23 03:03
stand up frnd and start to rebuild ur life again.
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THE_SPEAR_KING
2012/09/23 07:03
pain smiley
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_Ritesh rockx_
2012/09/23 15:55
Painful story
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jamella16
2012/09/23 16:15
happiness is tempo and so is pain. Just pick up urself and stand up. Everything will be alright smiley
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saahir
2012/09/23 17:34
Hold my hand, come close to me, I am waiting, some one will come, I don't know, from where and when, she will enter in my life, and will fill the vacuum, making place in my heart, and will change my empty life
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saahir
2012/09/23 17:34
Hold my hand, come close to me, I am waiting, some one will come, I don't know, from where and when, she will enter in my life, and will fill the vacuum, making place in my heart, and will change my empty life
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GITA_RS
2012/09/23 17:54
Nice but very sad..smiley
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Fantasy
2012/09/24 15:41
Heart touching...
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Hareesh
2012/09/28 05:07
Yes frnd u r ryt lv is life gud topic
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Hareesh
2012/09/29 16:04
Thanks a lot
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saahir
2012/10/10 13:19
The pain with I suffer Is not a pain of distances You are still close to me Yes, very close in my heart, I feel your existance When I close my eyes I feel your smooth touches When I smell your gifts I'm alive with your memories I'm alive with the ways we walked I'm alive with your gifts I'm alive with my heart beats Which always sings your song Which takes your name But when I open my eyes I see me, I'm "ALONE"..
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-Marizelle-
2012/10/10 13:23
So beautiful poem
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Manal
2012/10/10 13:25
wonderfulsmiley
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KingFISHER
2012/10/10 13:28
saahir: The pain with I suffer Is not a pain of distances You are still close to me Yes, very close in my heart, I feel your existance When I close my eyes I feel your smooth touches When I smell your gifts I'm alive with your memories I'm alive with the ways we walked I'm alive with your gifts I'm alive with my heart beats Which always sings your song Which takes your name But when I open my eyes I see me, I'm "ALONE"..
just outstanding written!
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aprillia
2012/10/10 14:03
wow really beautiful bro. smiley karma for u.smiley
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jamella16
2012/10/10 15:05
very nice,best!smiley U'l nevr be alone,u knw that..smiley
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Sandal
2012/10/10 19:46
Not only 4 a poem smiley
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