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~I Want to Live~

Unic0rn_GirL · Apr 4, 2012 09:01 14 46
Unic0rn_GirL OP
Apr 4, 2012 09:01
I want to live in your eyes Not as a dream, but as a sight I want to live in your mind Not as an Idea,but as a Memory I want to live in your heart Not as blood,but as a beat I want to live in your body Not as a soul, but as a feeling I want to live in your life Not as a friend but as a "REASON OF LIVING"
14 replies
Eternal_Knight
Apr 4, 2012 09:11
#1
Thats is so sweet.. I ll dedicate it to someone soon. .
Hkhan
Apr 4, 2012 09:12
#2
All nice one except 2nd lastsmiley
Dumbledore
Apr 4, 2012 09:15
#3
I want 2 be in ur tea, nt as d sugar but as d taste smiley nice topic
GhAyAl
Apr 4, 2012 09:19
#4
Me + you = we Live together
SoftwareboY
Apr 4, 2012 09:23
#5
Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? smiley just asking,yano curiosity...smiley
abi_simple
Apr 4, 2012 09:25
#6
awesome!!
Fluxion
Apr 4, 2012 09:26
#7
gud last lane smiley
saahir
Apr 4, 2012 10:04
#8
Beautiful poem, words emerged from ur own heart, so sweet, keep it on.
Unic0rn_GirL OP
Apr 4, 2012 11:58
#9
Thanks frenz for ur warm coments smiley
Unic0rn_GirL OP
Apr 4, 2012 12:00
#10
softwareboy: Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? smiley just asking,yano curiosity...smiley
Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor smiley
S3RIAL_KILL3R
Apr 4, 2012 16:39
#11
nice topic.
SoftwareboY
Apr 4, 2012 17:35
#12
Unic0rn_GirL: Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor smiley
smiley that's cool. I appreciate smiley
KingFISHER
Apr 5, 2012 04:48
#13
Awsome!
metalchris
Apr 5, 2012 08:26
#14
Awesome peom and toothsomely heart touching...luv itsmileysmiley
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