~I Want to Live~
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/04 09:01
I want to live in your eyes Not as a dream, but as a sight I want to live in your mind Not as an Idea,but as a Memory I want to live in your heart Not as blood,but as a beat I want to live in your body Not as a soul, but as a feeling I want to live in your life Not as a friend but as a "REASON OF LIVING"
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Eternal_Knight
2012/04/04 09:11
Thats is so sweet.. I ll dedicate it to someone soon. .
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Hkhan
2012/04/04 09:12
All nice one except 2nd lastsmiley
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Dumbledore
2012/04/04 09:15
I want 2 be in ur tea, nt as d sugar but as d taste smiley nice topic
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GhAyAl
2012/04/04 09:19
Me + you = we Live together
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SoftwareboY
2012/04/04 09:23
Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? smiley just asking,yano curiosity...smiley
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abi_simple
2012/04/04 09:25
awesome!!
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Fluxion
2012/04/04 09:26
gud last lane smiley
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saahir
2012/04/04 10:04
Beautiful poem, words emerged from ur own heart, so sweet, keep it on.
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/04 11:58
Thanks frenz for ur warm coments smiley
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/04 12:00
softwareboy: Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? smiley just asking,yano curiosity...smiley
Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor smiley
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S3RIAL_KILL3R
2012/04/04 16:39
nice topic.
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SoftwareboY
2012/04/04 17:35
Unic0rn_GirL: Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor smiley
smiley that's cool. I appreciate smiley
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KingFISHER
2012/04/05 04:48
Awsome!
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metalchris
2012/04/05 08:26
Awesome peom and toothsomely heart touching...luv itsmileysmiley
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