El-jay vs Narcoticz313
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Resphanto
2012/01/11 07:28
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End da brawlin here...now it time to eat da cooked beef.. Time limit- 24hrs(1 day) 2 verses each. Judges: Shaev7,Resphanto,Black_Listed,Askari,Elfuego. ..hit da nail on da cross...
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El-jay
2012/01/11 08:45
like slim said:. " i did not start this...but i will finish this"..... y'all kno my name and game, i got da money, mulla, chooms you wana pick on da greatest rapper? i'l knock out a tooth or two lock u in a room! hit u with a broom! drown you in monsoon! i've killed in indonesia.. i'l beat ya to a seisure dis aint no bitch shxt...i dont wana rape ya, i just want da paper i remain tha rap slayer,da sword swayer you will so get busted! amma spread ur blood like mustard i love violence, i feed on it... i do it with silence, like smokin weed on it got stacks behind ma sofa, i'l drive after i kill ma chauffeur read abt me in da magazines, amma brush u off d road wit a limousine i ride life on da west coast, you poor, here have a bread toast while i take shots off the marjuana smokes i got a RECORD.. that's UNEXPECTED but u'l never HEAR IT you not a rapper, you're ROTTEN a fag ass crapper who jus got FORGOTTEN wanna make friends on TWITTER? you wont make it, amma KILL YA make da right time like a ROLEX, yeah amma tell em why u beef me u're a bitch i refused to MOLEST, brought em dirty tits to me buh i ain't no faggot, shxt you forgot? its ur mama who really is this is ur first lesson... take 1, amma teach ya wat beef really is i always keep extra clips for extra beef talk too much amma put u to eternal sleep
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narcoticz313
2012/01/11 13:39
I bet you everything ure rapping nw! Well it was written down! Nope ! Dis aint no 8 mile this is bitch getting slapped like a chap worse than chaplin getting blown off by marylin monroe face facts fuck bag I'm the dude n ure da hoe so bend dat shxt over cus I wana make dat pussy wider n stretch that hole. u choked dats y googled flows didn't knw wat to attack me with throw lines n den cry blue murder I dissed u first! Phhhhhse shut ur face before I slay u with my iron fist leave u shaking ,terrified scared shxtless for everytime u hear my name u aim for the top of the game bt miss like a homless piece of shxt who spits ryhmes like his pissed out his mind ,battling me well dats a risk bt plz I'm sorry cus I didn't wana b da one dat made u put blade to wrist,kill u with a suicide verse make u hang ur neck frm the top of the rap stage deck u rap for fun n fame I rap 4 the homies up nu-tech n some respect. So take ur bitten ryhmes tit! cus I dnt have anytime for ppl I beat n end up being smitten with.WHITEDAWGETEM trademarked
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El-jay
2012/01/11 14:33
punk! learn to write well, i didnt even read ur lines (its homo) ur bitch got smacked and still tryina get wrapped round ma dick so tight in terms of rap.. am iller than an AIDS patient was that a rap? shxt sounded so ancient da greatest till eternity, my words will make ya loose ur virginity read wit 1 eye, watch me emerging... stop being scared u lil virgin damn, is dat rap? you juz swinging a hammer but cannot break a glass how dare you step BE~SIDE~ME? i promise this will be the LAST~YOU'LL~SEE you'll never BE ME..drop the M.I.C ... amma stop ur heart forzen like I.C.E i got u on my T.I.P... keep ur brain alert u gotta watch me on MTV buh shxt mehn, u broke as fuck aint got a TV wana know a SE~CRET? amma nigga who's W.H.I.T.E buh ah da same time am BLACK, can u comprehend THAT? (hell no) narcotic is wack! no matter how many times i say that! he'l never get fame i wudnt have said shxt if only u kept ur mouth SHUT!! bitch now WHAT!!?? wudda spared you da embarassment, now am throwin ur name in da basement i never back down! things are bad now!!! you'l die without even knowing HOW!! now you know how to build d rhyme up so for ur mam's sake, shut da hell up
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narcoticz313
2012/01/12 05:40
Hahahaha swagging frm internet rhymes chum rewriting it as ur own like a real broke bum stop acting gangsta son we all knw da reason y u rap socailly its cus u were booed off n chocked vocally , locally born narcotics pacing by leaving ur head spinning fucking ur mom like charlie sheen left WINNING ! Put ma name in da guiness cus I'm beginning to rip el jay claims to be a rapper bitch u so fake we all knw u bite yo ryhmes frm a chewing gum wrapper nw u tell me wuse wacker ? Incest sex u started that inbred shet looking at pics of ur sister slash mother busted a nut upinda slut ...no rubber nw u got a new son n a fucking brother. U fat fuck feel my flow da ony reason ul might win this rap is cus that cunt RES is hosting the show.fuck my lyrics nw cus ima slay my critics hw ?with a mashetti I'll slash ur life in half leave it divided , u minus ur hits on youtube I multiply mine bitch ,I'm ryhme rich I never choke cus I'll always come back with something devine with I'm like a ryhme biff.I'm superman n ur louis n dis just and ur lane wana be nick jonas u take chances like a real chance go-er I spit flames like a fucking flamethrower leave ur brain sore shxtty metaphores I cut in half with a chainsaw I'm real rap bru mc thru n thru yelawolf next gen to da core..u strike first I came back with a waffle bat smacked ur ass that u had to produce raps frm a step by step rap book I'm king bitch I beat u at ur own game slay u with verbs that I attentionally directed at you ! WHITEDAWGETEM trademarked
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narcoticz313
2012/01/12 09:46
narcoticz313: Hahahaha swagging frm internet rhymes chum rewriting it as ur own like a real broke bum stop acting gangsta son we all knw da reason y u rap socailly its cus u were booed off n chocked vocally , locally born narcotics pacing by leaving ur head spinning fucking ur mom like charlie sheen left WINNING ! Put ma name in da guiness cus I'm beginning to rip el jay claims to be a rapper bitch u so fake we all knw u bite yo ryhmes frm a chewing gum wrapper nw u tell me wuse wacker ? Incest sex u started that inbred shet looking at pics of ur sister slash mother busted a nut upinda slut ...no rubber nw u got a new son n a fucking brother. U fat fuck feel my flow da ony reason ul might win this rap is cus that cunt RES is hosting the show.fuck my lyrics nw cus ima slay my critics hw ?with a mashetti I'll slash ur life in half leave it divided , u minus ur hits on youtube I multiply mine bitch ,I'm ryhme rich I never choke cus I'll always come back with something devine with I'm like a ryhme biff.I'm superman n ur louis n dis just and ur lane wana be nick jonas u take chances like a real chance go-er I spit flames like a fucking flamethrower leave ur brain sore shxtty metaphores I cut in half with a chainsaw I'm real rap bru mc thru n thru yelawolf next gen to da core..u strike first I came back with a waffle bat smacked ur ass that u had to produce raps frm a step by step rap book I'm king bitch I beat u at ur own game slay u with verbs that I attentionally directed at you ! WHITEDAWGETEM trademarked
thanx for the karma in both verses homies! I think I have this one inda bag let's just see wat the judges have to say
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narcoticz313
2012/01/12 16:53
Damn boy u got it harder than your moms fuck toy
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Resphanto
2012/01/12 20:00
Time up...jugdes pls cast yr vote
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Shaev7
2012/01/13 01:49
Bullsh.t This needs no judge! El-jay juz slanged on Narc...blood! Punches Wordplay Meta4s Mhen! Hegot my votes. NARC, pls make ur flow mur easy 2read intemz of ur barz! U gud 2,buh Jay Schooled ya!
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narcoticz313
2012/01/13 08:27
I liked wat u sed bt I rap like this I'm a different rapper frm use up in ere I mix up old school with da new school my verses have metaphores n some dnt n I prefer it like that.I'm a rapper who tells stories in his rapz nt five words n on to da next line
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narcoticz313
2012/01/13 08:31
It looks like el jay won nt cus he dissed me messed up cus he typed hz ryhmes in a certain way. Congrats el jay I enjoyed this we must do it agen sometime
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narcoticz313
2012/01/13 08:34
This is a reminder to all u rappers I'm nt to be fucked with. Me n el jay had some beef n we sorted it out so unless u wana diss someone u do it in a battle nt in a freestyle
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El-jay
2012/01/13 09:42
narcoticz313: This is a reminder to all u rappers I'm nt to be fucked with. Me n el jay had some beef n we sorted it out so unless u wana diss someone u do it in a battle nt in a freestyle
da fuck? told ya quit frontin'...u wudnt listen bitch... anyways, felt da brawl.. and agree with shaev, u gotta put ur wordz in line so d rhymes can be felt. in the mean time, SHUT DA FUCK UP SON! lets see wat da other judges gotta say
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Yungboss
2012/01/13 09:43
uhuh, wat cn i say nw u n jay r patna or what, nice battle though
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Resphanto
2012/01/13 10:43
Narcoticz!!!...i like yr spirit and attitude...bt keep da shxt brawlin cos without beef,rap is gonna be boring..lol i love to eat beef... Jst as Shaev said El-jay...screwed diss shxt up. My vote goes to him.
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narcoticz313
2012/01/13 11:20
El-jay: da fuck? told ya quit frontin'...u wudnt listen bitch... anyways, felt da brawl.. and agree with shaev, u gotta put ur wordz in line so d rhymes can be felt. in the mean time, SHUT DA FUCK UP SON! lets see wat da other judges gotta say
u stil suck u bitch smiley
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narcoticz313
2012/01/13 11:33
Whores will always be cute bunnys! N rappers na I dnt knw ppls reading to much dictionaries nw days
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Shaev7
2012/01/13 11:35
El-Jay wins!
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