when Love is "We"!..!
21 replies
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/28 17:02
i had forgotten how to smile
laughin... just was not my style
i was just trying to.... walk another mile
feeling so blue....
not having a clue...
About what i should do...
and then.....there was you
so near & so far...
....the Moon & a Star
laughing & smiling....
....all the while whiling
away together.... day by day
just you & me feeling how good Love can be
when Love is "We"
THE_SPEAR_KING
2011/11/28 17:08
nice 1.
Mujhe meri xgf ki yaad aa gayi.
__RoMaNTiC_JaTT__
2011/11/28 17:08 THE_SPEAR_KING:
nice 1.
Mujhe meri xgf ki yaad aa gayi.
its gud yar
nice 1.
Mujhe meri xgf ki yaad aa gayi.
EpIcInCoGnItO
2011/11/28 17:09This is true and touching subu
THE_SPEAR_KING
2011/11/28 17:13 _RoMaNTiC_KabiR_: its gud yar
gud
but bad too.
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/28 17:13 THE_SPEAR_KING:
nice 1.
Mujhe meri xgf ki yaad aa gayi.
nice 1.
Mujhe meri xgf ki yaad aa gayi.
WilLow_DarkSky
2011/11/28 17:24
nice one..nd so touching
Ogolos
2011/11/28 17:25Wow!nice
THE_SPEAR_KING
2011/11/28 17:27 subrat:
Ice-Fairy
2011/11/28 17:27this is nice yaar
_h3AvEn_KiNG_
2011/11/28 17:29
Mahak
2011/11/28 17:30Sounds good
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/28 17:32 THE_SPEAR_KING:
plz dont cry ... Past memories only gives u pain 
Be happy & make others happy 
Pr1ya
2011/11/28 18:01
Brilliant poem Subrat, Well done!
At times we forget how to smile and laugh because we view our troubles greater than what they are. As such, we try to walk alone for miles, hoping that each mile will be better than the previous.. and maybe, just maybe then we will be able to smile again.
But, overtime we get so caught up in walking another mile alone that we just forget that laughing and smiling is possible and there's always gonna be someone there with us, who's willing to hold our hand and walk "another mile" with us, someone whose happy only when "we" are, someone who will share everything with us; tears, laughters and smiles, someone who wants nothing more than to walk with us and make us happy always. Someone who truly wants to take away all our "blues". Someone who may not have a clue about what they should do.. but they're willing to try nonetheless.
And that is what makes "US", two hearts beating as one... A love so pure and true that it can only exist if both partners realise the Beauty of "WE".
Side by side or miles apart, a love so strong can never be torn apart, not by distance and not in heart. That's WE!
Always near in soul, always taking every breath thinking of our Beloved & praying for their good health.. living for them, doing everything to make them happy..just being there for them.
Listening to them, sitting under the "Moon" and "Stars" and watching the twinkles in the dark velvet night sky as WE hold onto each other and thank the Heavens for Blessing US with a love so true.. A love that can never be blue. A love that makes us laugh and smile only when WE are together, a love that brings out the best in us. Day by day, night after night.. No matter what may come.
Just US feeling how good Love can truly be.
This is when Love is "We". 
scarllete
2011/11/29 02:24it's sweet and absolutely true ....i like it ....nice one 
....i like it ....nice one
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/29 02:29 priya: Brilliant poem Subrat, Well done!
At times we forget how to smile and laugh because we view our troubles greater than what they are. As such, we try to walk alone for miles, hoping that each mile will be better than the previous.. and maybe, just maybe then we will be able to smile again.
But, overtime we get so caught up in walking another mile alone that we just forget that laughing and smiling is possible and there's always gonna be someone there with us, who's willing to hold our hand and walk "another mile" with us, someone whose happy only when "we" are, someone who will share everything with us; tears, laughters and smiles, someone who wants nothing more than to walk with us and make us happy always. Someone who truly wants to take away all our "blues". Someone who may not have a clue about what they should do.. but they're willing to try nonetheless.
And that is what makes "US", two hearts beating as one... A love so pure and true that it can only exist if both partners realise the Beauty of "WE".
Side by side or miles apart, a love so strong can never be torn apart, not by distance and not in heart. That's WE!
Always near in soul, always taking every breath thinking of our Beloved & praying for their good health.. living for them, doing everything to make them happy..just being there for them.
Listening to them, sitting under the "Moon" and "Stars" and watching the twinkles in the dark velvet night sky as WE hold onto each other and thank the Heavens for Blessing US with a love so true.. A love that can never be blue. A love that makes us laugh and smile only when WE are together, a love that brings out the best in us. Day by day, night after night.. No matter what may come.
Just US feeling how good Love can truly be.
This is when Love is "We".
satisfactory descriptoin Brilliant poem Subrat, Well done!
At times we forget how to smile and laugh because we view our troubles greater than what they are. As such, we try to walk alone for miles, hoping that each mile will be better than the previous.. and maybe, just maybe then we will be able to smile again.
But, overtime we get so caught up in walking another mile alone that we just forget that laughing and smiling is possible and there's always gonna be someone there with us, who's willing to hold our hand and walk "another mile" with us, someone whose happy only when "we" are, someone who will share everything with us; tears, laughters and smiles, someone who wants nothing more than to walk with us and make us happy always. Someone who truly wants to take away all our "blues". Someone who may not have a clue about what they should do.. but they're willing to try nonetheless.
And that is what makes "US", two hearts beating as one... A love so pure and true that it can only exist if both partners realise the Beauty of "WE".
Side by side or miles apart, a love so strong can never be torn apart, not by distance and not in heart. That's WE!
Always near in soul, always taking every breath thinking of our Beloved & praying for their good health.. living for them, doing everything to make them happy..just being there for them.
Listening to them, sitting under the "Moon" and "Stars" and watching the twinkles in the dark velvet night sky as WE hold onto each other and thank the Heavens for Blessing US with a love so true.. A love that can never be blue. A love that makes us laugh and smile only when WE are together, a love that brings out the best in us. Day by day, night after night.. No matter what may come.
Just US feeling how good Love can truly be.
This is when Love is "We". 
..how many times did u take to describe it ??
Pr1ya
2011/11/29 05:53 subrat: satisfactory descriptoin ..how many times did u take to describe it ??
..how many times did u take to describe it ?? 
Thank you, I seem to be paying too much attention to your poems 
& you quoted my entire post! 
But... 
What you mean how many times?
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/29 07:50 priya: Thank you, I seem to be paying too much attention to your poems & you quoted my entire post! But... What you mean how many times?
you should be awarded as best describer of my poem Thank you, I seem to be paying too much attention to your poems & you quoted my entire post! But... What you mean how many times?
Pr1ya
2011/11/29 08:51 subrat: you should be awarded as best describer of my poem
That's a good one
LoneLy_heArt
2011/11/29 13:04 priya: That's a good one
That's a good one 
Ginamarie
2011/11/30 01:24A beautiful & very true poem, takes me back to another time
i think love is d only emotion dat can get us out of any slump.
It makes u look forward to another day despite of d bad curve balls, life's gonna throw @ u, but it doesnt matter as long as u get to see & be wit dat person, everythin else suddenly seems good
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