A nice poem but d sad part is, it reminds me of a friend dat went through this, they both knew they were not good for each other, they both knew it wud end badly, they both knew they were too different to come to a common ground, but they still took a chance & it left them shattered

but wat really bothers me is this ''make u mine'' say it over & over it sounds like their ur property!
I hv always believed wen u truely love sum1, u giv urself to them willingly & fully witout expectin anythin in return, if ur fortunate they will do d same, dats wen u know its love. I wudnt like it if d person i loved said to me ur mine! See how it sounds