In those lake-deep eyes
I have published this urdu poem here at 2wap,s forums and got very good response from the urdu speaking community. However those who doesn't understand urdu, were up with complaint for a translation. I have tried to translate it literally, rather than wordly, so it become a complete poem, in the very same theme . I can easily pronounce it as a english version. Now read again urdu and then english version. I hope you will enjoy it, mind you that the original beauty of poetry can not be transfered in any other language.
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Un jheel si gehri ankhon main,
Ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho ,
Us jheel kinaaray pal do pal,
Ik khawaab ka neela phool khilay Wo phool baha dain lehron main,
Ik roz kabhi hum shaam dhalay,
Uss phool kay behtay rangon main Jis waqt laraztaa chaand chalay,
Uss waqt kahin un ankhon main,
Uss basray pal ki yaad to ho,
Un jheel si gehri ankhon main,
Ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho,
Phir chahay zeest samandar ki
Har maoj preshaan ho jaaye,
phir chahay aankh dareechay say Har khawaab guraizaan ho jaaye Phir chahay phool kay chehray ka Har dard numayaan ho jaaye,
Uss jheel kinaray pal do pal ,
Wo roop-nagar iijaad to ho
Din raat kay iss aaieenay say
Woh aks kabhi aazaad to ho,
Un jheel si gehri ankhon main ik shaam kahin aabaad to ho. . . . .
22 replies
"In those,
Lake-deep eyes,
shall an evening
Come to dies...
Even though,
For a minute or two,
Blooming a dream flower of blue ,
Setting it then,
On the waves through,
Somewhere down the night,
Colouring up bright,
When the trembling Moon gets low,
In order to flow,
And to crystalize the moment,
In those eyes,
To remember something
For the lonesome life. . .
In those, lake-deep eyes,
Star shines
Sunrise....
Then doesn't matter
if every wave,
Gotto be go away for ever,
Would be saved
Or every dream,
From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate
Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . .
but once
0n the bank of those lake deep eyes,
Shall uprise,
The world of beau
To free the reflections true,
For a minute or two
In those lake deep eyes.
shall an evening
come to live!"
As_Ash: "In those,
Lake-deep eyes,
shall an evening
Come to live...
Even though,
For a minute or two,
Blooming a dream flower of blue ,
Setting it then,
On the waves through,
Somewhere down the night,
Colouring up bright,
When the trembling Moon gets low,
In order to flow,
And to crystalize the moment,
In those eyes,
To remember something
For the lonesome life. . .
In those, lake-deep eyes,
Star shines
Sunrise....
Then doesn't matter
if every wave,
Gotto be go away for ever,
Would be saved
Or every dream,
From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate
Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . .
but once
0n the bank of those lake deep eyes,
Shall uprise,
The world of beau
To free the reflections true,
For a minute or two
In those lake deep eyes.
shall an evening
come to live!"
Great composition. Well done.
very nice one.... 
keep up your good work
As_Ash: "In those,
Lake-deep eyes,
shall an evening
Come to dies...
Even though,
For a minute or two,
Blooming a dream flower of blue ,
Setting it then,
On the waves through,
Somewhere down the night,
Colouring up bright,
When the trembling Moon gets low,
In order to flow,
And to crystalize the moment,
In those eyes,
To remember something
For the lonesome life. . .
In those, lake-deep eyes,
Star shines
Sunrise....
Then doesn't matter
if every wave,
Gotto be go away for ever,
Would be saved
Or every dream,
From the fenster of my eys got tobe evacuate
Or every pain gets appear on the flawer face. . .
but once
0n the bank of those lake deep eyes,
Shall uprise,
The world of beau
To free the reflections true,
For a minute or two
In those lake deep eyes.
shall an evening
come to live!"
if nature poem?? The sun is is in the heavens & life on earth.... Flowers in the valley... splendor in the beam... Health on the gale& freshness in the stream.....why????? 
