Losing You
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____THe.bosS
2011/07/12 11:39
I never thought this day would come, Where my true love would leave me, I know you see me all tore up inside, But what else is there to do but cry. You are watching over me day and night, And you can feel my pain inside, You tried to stay here on earth for me, But God called upon you and wanted you with him. The reason I'm still living is, I know your waiting for my turn to go, And every time I feel like dying, I think what would you want me to do.
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Laketempest
2011/07/12 11:45
Nice smiley
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Someone
2011/07/12 11:48
Nice one. Bit short but ends with nice lines.
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Laketempest
2011/07/12 12:52
smiley make more.
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SpArKo
2011/07/12 12:53
Oh thats sad..
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_-FiRe-PhOeNiX-_
2011/07/12 12:55
NiCe one smiley .
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lady_xyrelle
2011/07/12 13:00
sad but god have always reason 4 everything..
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LoneLy_heArt
2011/07/12 13:11
losing whom smiley
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NinthElement
2011/07/12 13:19
Great work smiley
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Sweet_Divyanka
2011/07/12 13:26
Wow bro keep going on smiley
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Lelsi
2011/07/12 15:03
Aw its sad indeed, but everything happens for a reason..even when our loved ones leave us forever they remain alive in our hearts.
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GhAyAl
2011/07/12 19:54
Nice 2
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Ice-Fairy
2011/07/13 06:05
So sadsmiley
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R49hu
2011/07/13 08:53
words are perfect and good one once again
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Marlou
2011/07/13 09:16
smiley thats soo0o sad.
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_ShAnE_StArK_
2013/09/21 12:44
good post...
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KenMane
2013/09/22 14:01
Surity
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RasJamy
2013/09/23 05:53
It painful
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RiC_L
2013/09/23 08:13
Nice smiley
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