Spontaneous Poems.

FalleN · Jun 10, 2011 17:40 29 252

FalleN OP

Jun 10, 2011 17:40

I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. smiley

And please no stupid copy-pasting

29 replies

FalleN OP

Jun 10, 2011 17:58

Snow flakes on the pond Drifting towards the sea, Swept up by time And of course, eternity. Damn, server gave me a few moments to think, but it WAS spontaneous. smiley

Muwale

Jun 10, 2011 18:11

Nice try.

_KJOE_

Jun 10, 2011 18:12

Mine comes sooner smiley

FalleN OP

Jun 10, 2011 18:14

_KJOE_: Mine comes sooner smiley

So, where is it? Or you just agree. smiley

__ScRraPpY__LoVeR__

Jun 10, 2011 18:35

DuM !

jazzy12

Jun 10, 2011 18:36

ok i got a lot what or you talking about cuz so what up with you

donprecious

Jun 10, 2011 18:42

Composing mine!

ReAl_PrincEss

Jun 10, 2011 18:49

lost c0nnecti0n try again huhuhu.

FalleN OP

Jun 11, 2011 04:53

DeMoNiC_AnGeL: m waiting for u.. waiting for this dark time to pass through.. u r aint urself anymore.. the gaming fever is on ur head for sure.. m tryina get ur attention.. but ur ignorance is really puttin me in tension.. i will wait until u rearrange ur priorties.. n till ur sure of what it is.. hope u wil call me soon.. m lookin up to the midnight moon..

kazzy

Jun 11, 2011 13:27

Going to church does not make you a christian, anymore than standing in your garage makes you a car..

FalleN OP

Jun 12, 2011 06:46

Tears in my eyes, Jello in the mold. Am I cool? Or just plain bold? smiley

haris

Jun 12, 2011 08:58

jhonny jhonny yes papa, Eatin sugar? no papa. Tellin a lie? Haha smiley

FalleN OP

Jun 12, 2011 09:44

haris: jhonny jhonny yes papa, Eatin sugar? no papa. Tellin a lie? Haha smiley

Crazy good. smiley

sH1vAm

Jun 12, 2011 15:19

FalleN: I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. smiley

And please no stupid copy-pasting

I've got one.... I got up early, My hairs were curly, I pissed in my pants nearly smiley

, It happens rarely! I go to watch TV sincerely, I was watching Lost regularly, I liked a fat man called Hurley, But Jack was acting poorly!

wapgirl

Jun 12, 2011 19:27

If i could have just one wish,i would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of ur breath on my nick,the warmth of you lips on my cheek,the touch of your finger n my skin,and the feel of your heart beating of mine.....Knowing that i could never find the feeling with anyone other than you.

FalleN OP

Jun 12, 2011 19:54

sH1vAm: I've got one.... I got up early, My hairs were curly, I pissed in my pants nearly smiley

, It happens rarely! I go to watch TV sincerely, I was watching Lost regularly, I liked a fat man called Hurley, But Jack was acting poorly!

Wow, good one, I like lost... I've seen it twice. smiley

Insenus_AmoR

Jun 14, 2011 21:17

I feel so alone, Textin on my phone. I wish she would talk to me, I think I might go crazy! smiley

EpIcInCoGnItO

Jun 14, 2011 21:19

Thats sweet and frank smiley

AfaQue: I feel so alone, Textin on my phone. I wish she would talk to me, I think I might go crazy! smiley

Kumz

Jun 15, 2011 04:38

I dont know... I dont know...! I DONT KNOW!!!!!! You love me, but am not good enough. You hate me, but I'm the one you can't live without. You dump me, then you want me back. I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap. There's another waiting for me. She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free. I dont mind either... I dont mind none. I just need a breather, a coke and rum.

Kumz

Jun 15, 2011 04:49

When her mood's up, mine goes high! When her's is low... Mine stays high! When she's PMSing... My mood's still fine. When her mood's are swinging, Mine's sky rocketing. When she's loving, I'm just plain high. She Screams, I laugh. She scolds, I still laugh. She dumps me for the stupidest reasons, yet I laugh. She cries and wants me back... That's when I fall apart.