Raplordz Shaev7 vs Ouch
DotmonKing 2011/04/06 20:55
DotmonKing 2011/04/06 20:55
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RAPLORDZ BATTLE MATCH DAY 2
RULES
1.timelimit shall be 24 hourz.
2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post having a total of 6 post after each match)
3. No interferance until after match.
4. No biting.
winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round.
Goodluck to you raplords
RULES
1.timelimit shall be 24 hourz.
2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post having a total of 6 post after each match)
3. No interferance until after match.
4. No biting.
winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round.
Goodluck to you raplords
Shaev7 2011/04/07 08:54
I cn c u ~waitin~ 4me 2post 1ST/ok ama do dat witout ~waitn 4u am batlin u wtout a buletproff VEST/lemme tel u directly,am nt gona waste punchlines/on cuz u b 1 sort lyk da guy so_sublime's/battl i did last dat almst got my rapwordz declined/u again OUCH^guez we'd a match b4 dat was a SHOUT^cuz i won u wtout HANDS^4typin as my presence DISS^STABB^ILL^ICE^ U(distabilize)/d whol 2wap knws dat b4 nw am alrdy crownd da 'rapLord'so dis nt a joke bt am DE^MOB^ILL^ICIN'^U(demobilizin)/yo got da wrd play there cuz its d orda of MOB(money over bitchez) bck 2u KID/i dnt knw wat 2 spit cuz u a SQUID/a creatur bonelez frm OCTOPUS/see me xtra odinary cuz am POPULUS/nw check El-jay's irony as he ^FLEW HIGH WIT PARACHUTE^how ya felt bitch as my ship ^SANK IN D SWIMMER'S POOL^frm my WORDS/u cn c d mic is scared of me cuz it feelz u juz recoverd frm da rapleague wounded SOREZ/how/wher do i hit u wn u body is ful of SCARZ/bruise n u neck slitted wt chlamidia^SWORDZ/no nid 4ds cuz im alrdy on d mood of CELEBRATION/nw lemme divert a lil,d world is mine,am on d book of REVELATION/wen i ^SAW^2beast cumin up outa d SEA/had 10~horns~n~7*heads~on each of it horns ther was a crown n d beast ^RAW^had resemblance of a leopard with bear's FEET(shaev wt 7heads n Raw d beast)/am juz 2 ill n hospitalized rhymez,d3mons in hell PHUKIN LUCIFER/my dick so ^so roasted^as Raw SUCKIN^wt^COOL^icer/2bad OUCH^by dis tym in 6hrz u'l b bLaCk~LiSt3d/frm da rapzone itself cuz u cnt meet up wt da tAsK~InSt3d/so u beta juz announce u^quit^n leav it 4d rAp~GiFt3d/u kno hw YUNGBOS/died urz wil b mur dan da CROSS/if u feel u gona spit EARTH's^FIRE/2bad cuz mine is gona b HELL^FIRE/u'l burn till ~eternity~datz d ~mentality~ur life's ful of ~calamitiez~com taste me 100% ful of ~salinity~ur ^INTESTINE^ripd out 2produce GEE~STRINGS/wt ur ~pancrease~apart frm da digestive system 4 BLING~BLINGS/nw leme say 1 our Father,1 HAIL MARY n 1 GLORY BE TO THE FATHER 4DS SHIP~BITCH/nail 2 d cross hav u body bittien n chopd out BIT^by^BIT/
nw am endin ds wt a STICTH^on^ur DICK/so no afraid u SNITCHD^last^on d^BEAT/
See dis cat OUCH ^BLEEDIN^DYIN/on tha rap cross of calvary//2 da cross thy sinz have KNEEL^HIM^(nailed him)/and he bleeds n died as bitch//
so God our father,4giv his SIN/cuz he's very weak//oh God,hav mercy cuz he hopes on THEE/cuz trout his battle LIVEZ/wt me he STRIVES/2win bt at da end he alws CRIES;/who then can tak [shaev] in ds RAPZ?
I'VE SAID IT ALL,WAT U GOT TO SAY,SPIT CRAP N LEMME SEAL IT
I cn c u ~waitin~ 4me 2post 1ST/ok ama do dat witout ~waitn 4u am batlin u wtout a buletproff VEST/lemme tel u directly,am nt gona waste punchlines/on cuz u b 1 sort lyk da guy so_sublime's/battl i did last dat almst got my rapwordz declined/u again OUCH^guez we'd a match b4 dat was a SHOUT^cuz i won u wtout HANDS^4typin as my presence DISS^STABB^ILL^ICE^ U(distabilize)/d whol 2wap knws dat b4 nw am alrdy crownd da 'rapLord'so dis nt a joke bt am DE^MOB^ILL^ICIN'^U(demobilizin)/yo got da wrd play there cuz its d orda of MOB(money over bitchez) bck 2u KID/i dnt knw wat 2 spit cuz u a SQUID/a creatur bonelez frm OCTOPUS/see me xtra odinary cuz am POPULUS/nw check El-jay's irony as he ^FLEW HIGH WIT PARACHUTE^how ya felt bitch as my ship ^SANK IN D SWIMMER'S POOL^frm my WORDS/u cn c d mic is scared of me cuz it feelz u juz recoverd frm da rapleague wounded SOREZ/how/wher do i hit u wn u body is ful of SCARZ/bruise n u neck slitted wt chlamidia^SWORDZ/no nid 4ds cuz im alrdy on d mood of CELEBRATION/nw lemme divert a lil,d world is mine,am on d book of REVELATION/wen i ^SAW^2beast cumin up outa d SEA/had 10~horns~n~7*heads~on each of it horns ther was a crown n d beast ^RAW^had resemblance of a leopard with bear's FEET(shaev wt 7heads n Raw d beast)/am juz 2 ill n hospitalized rhymez,d3mons in hell PHUKIN LUCIFER/my dick so ^so roasted^as Raw SUCKIN^wt^COOL^icer/2bad OUCH^by dis tym in 6hrz u'l b bLaCk~LiSt3d/frm da rapzone itself cuz u cnt meet up wt da tAsK~InSt3d/so u beta juz announce u^quit^n leav it 4d rAp~GiFt3d/u kno hw YUNGBOS/died urz wil b mur dan da CROSS/if u feel u gona spit EARTH's^FIRE/2bad cuz mine is gona b HELL^FIRE/u'l burn till ~eternity~datz d ~mentality~ur life's ful of ~calamitiez~com taste me 100% ful of ~salinity~ur ^INTESTINE^ripd out 2produce GEE~STRINGS/wt ur ~pancrease~apart frm da digestive system 4 BLING~BLINGS/nw leme say 1 our Father,1 HAIL MARY n 1 GLORY BE TO THE FATHER 4DS SHIP~BITCH/nail 2 d cross hav u body bittien n chopd out BIT^by^BIT/
nw am endin ds wt a STICTH^on^ur DICK/so no afraid u SNITCHD^last^on d^BEAT/
See dis cat OUCH ^BLEEDIN^DYIN/on tha rap cross of calvary//2 da cross thy sinz have KNEEL^HIM^(nailed him)/and he bleeds n died as bitch//
so God our father,4giv his SIN/cuz he's very weak//oh God,hav mercy cuz he hopes on THEE/cuz trout his battle LIVEZ/wt me he STRIVES/2win bt at da end he alws CRIES;/who then can tak [shaev] in ds RAPZ?
I'VE SAID IT ALL,WAT U GOT TO SAY,SPIT CRAP N LEMME SEAL IT
Ouch 2011/04/07 12:47
D ring is set
leme cast it open,its bn a long tym,
since i pt a niga in ma oven,
Shaev i hrd dt u wr caut dopn
&ryt nw,u r abt 2breath death choken,
Yea,dr's notn lyk Shaev7,
u've bn rap dead since may7,my vibes kild u on march11,
so niga say notn,if u die u r nt goin 2heaven,
down,down,pit,yea,dr u'll b buried,
cus u r notin bt a 4ck rap gravn,
i myt nt b populr in dis batle-ish,im 2wap mudrfuckn rap-kish,
u myt b regular,
bt am gona pop u tru ma celulaar,
u spk 2much of varnaculaar,ama bloody eat u lyk a draculaar,
lasttym i hrd a name SHAEV,i tot a niga is gtn his beard SHAVE,
Watch SHAEV,ur name is beard SHAVE,my dogs changd SHAEV 2VE-ASH,pusy u r a V-ASS,&am on d big-CLASS,
Muderfckr u r nt 2b in dis CLASS,
I hrd dm caln u LEGEND,
bt 4ckr i gt a pak 4u,pusy u r LEG-END,i mn ur LEG-ENDS,so gt dent,
OUCH spit venom,dats y i gt u bent,niga SHARA-4CKUP cuz u r rap-DEAD,dats y i 4ckd u,BRENT
D ring is set
leme cast it open,its bn a long tym,
since i pt a niga in ma oven,
Shaev i hrd dt u wr caut dopn
&ryt nw,u r abt 2breath death choken,
Yea,dr's notn lyk Shaev7,
u've bn rap dead since may7,my vibes kild u on march11,
so niga say notn,if u die u r nt goin 2heaven,
down,down,pit,yea,dr u'll b buried,
cus u r notin bt a 4ck rap gravn,
i myt nt b populr in dis batle-ish,im 2wap mudrfuckn rap-kish,
u myt b regular,
bt am gona pop u tru ma celulaar,
u spk 2much of varnaculaar,ama bloody eat u lyk a draculaar,
lasttym i hrd a name SHAEV,i tot a niga is gtn his beard SHAVE,
Watch SHAEV,ur name is beard SHAVE,my dogs changd SHAEV 2VE-ASH,pusy u r a V-ASS,&am on d big-CLASS,
Muderfckr u r nt 2b in dis CLASS,
I hrd dm caln u LEGEND,
bt 4ckr i gt a pak 4u,pusy u r LEG-END,i mn ur LEG-ENDS,so gt dent,
OUCH spit venom,dats y i gt u bent,niga SHARA-4CKUP cuz u r rap-DEAD,dats y i 4ckd u,BRENT
Ouch 2011/04/07 14:03
Shaev evn if u gt buletproof,i cn hit u cuz u r deadprove,
u r afraid of ma shot,i dnt gv a 4ck of u&ur crew,
u supose 2avoid me,bt i c dt kids ar nt afraid,so ama teach u 2rules of rap.
1 dnt mes wit a slepn lion.
2 dnt spk shxt wn u no u cnt flush it.
Bt man u jst brk d rules
i didnt read wt u wrot man,cuz i no u'l jst praise urself man,
lasttym i left u,cuz ma last flow popd u a coma,
nw im bk on d corner,seein lil kids spitn shxt,
i dnt no wia 2hit u son,
cuz ive left enuf bruises on u,
u wia sayn BLA abt ur crew,
so sory,u hv toys 2bk u up,
tumbsup toy machines u hv dia,bt neva u mes wit ril nigas,cuz i gt dis kila atitude,
i generat hy magnitud,mudrfckr gt ur substitute,ur droids&robots i kild wit 2flows,
u afrad tk ur VEST,
remembr u no i crest,
u no u r a beast,bt 2me u r lyk a yeast,u r a clown@my feast,dts y i hit u wif ma fist.
Shaev evn if u gt buletproof,i cn hit u cuz u r deadprove,
u r afraid of ma shot,i dnt gv a 4ck of u&ur crew,
u supose 2avoid me,bt i c dt kids ar nt afraid,so ama teach u 2rules of rap.
1 dnt mes wit a slepn lion.
2 dnt spk shxt wn u no u cnt flush it.
Bt man u jst brk d rules
i didnt read wt u wrot man,cuz i no u'l jst praise urself man,
lasttym i left u,cuz ma last flow popd u a coma,
nw im bk on d corner,seein lil kids spitn shxt,
i dnt no wia 2hit u son,
cuz ive left enuf bruises on u,
u wia sayn BLA abt ur crew,
so sory,u hv toys 2bk u up,
tumbsup toy machines u hv dia,bt neva u mes wit ril nigas,cuz i gt dis kila atitude,
i generat hy magnitud,mudrfckr gt ur substitute,ur droids&robots i kild wit 2flows,
u afrad tk ur VEST,
remembr u no i crest,
u no u r a beast,bt 2me u r lyk a yeast,u r a clown@my feast,dts y i hit u wif ma fist.
Ouch 2011/04/07 14:06
Bring ur adroids,bring fort ur robots.
I hp dey gt more bloods,cuz ama lick dm lyk yorghurt,
i dnt spk much,dats y am 2much,
am 2wap rap cleanser,
bring fort ur sister
&i hp she's a spinster,
cuz am gona cut u lyk pizza,niga pray 2JESUS,am abt cutn u wit scisors,
dia's no penetenary
in 2wap rap cemetary
i'l kil u wif my pen-wafametory
den ama create ur poster
in 2wap rap rollcar
let dm no hw i eat u lyk a toaster,
and train u lyk a rooster
fuck u sistr in my ride coaster,cuz pusy,she's a pornster&a fuckstar,haha her pusy is a hardstart:-P,
i'l advertise ur name @2wap obituary poster,
leme teach hw 2pray,
in ur 4ckn dead tomb,nobody gona pray,HAIL MARY,wat dey gona pray is FAIR MAY HE,cuz u mes wid gr8test HE%-)
ITS OUCH CUZ IM 2MUCH
Bring ur adroids,bring fort ur robots.
I hp dey gt more bloods,cuz ama lick dm lyk yorghurt,
i dnt spk much,dats y am 2much,
am 2wap rap cleanser,
bring fort ur sister
&i hp she's a spinster,
cuz am gona cut u lyk pizza,niga pray 2JESUS,am abt cutn u wit scisors,
dia's no penetenary
in 2wap rap cemetary
i'l kil u wif my pen-wafametory
den ama create ur poster
in 2wap rap rollcar
let dm no hw i eat u lyk a toaster,
and train u lyk a rooster
fuck u sistr in my ride coaster,cuz pusy,she's a pornster&a fuckstar,haha her pusy is a hardstart:-P,
i'l advertise ur name @2wap obituary poster,
leme teach hw 2pray,
in ur 4ckn dead tomb,nobody gona pray,HAIL MARY,wat dey gona pray is FAIR MAY HE,cuz u mes wid gr8test HE%-)
ITS OUCH CUZ IM 2MUCH
Shaev7 2011/04/07 19:16
RULEZ VIOLATED!
i gues u nid no MULTIEZ^NO^FLOWS^n^WORD PLAY/so bring ur ^SHAWTIEZ^wt her slited^THROAT^lemme phuk her lyka GAY/i may hav 2 drop low sh.t cuz even if u write mur VERZE/yurz ar lyk dead ornamentals outa its VERSE/juz luk @ur flows nt ARANGE/so DERANGE/n cnt muv wt mine @lng RANGE/damn ds battlez supoz 2b 4da RAP^LORDZ/nw al i c is a nigga OUCH^WHOREZ/u violatd da rulez by postn al ya shxt AT^ONCE/
lemme infom u if am gona los,dat'll cuz of WRONG JUDGE/ds zone's abt 2xperience a SHOT OF ONE/as i kil ds bitch bragin/shxt he phukn cald rappin/dat reminds me old sch days wen i ws raggin/u rhymez so poor,u nid sum bankin/u say am so regular/n u gona pop me wt ya celular/n have me fed on lyk a dracular/imma crest it bold 'YOU FOOL' wt out medula/hw many timez do i tel u amma dead^human/nw am cumin 2slit u throat wt a helicopter prepella/chok u wt lethal umbrella/ya want punchez/amma giv em 2u 'baptizmaly' lyk churchez/whil i sit on d tv wt my juice n crunchez/watchn hw i lamed u,confined u 2 clutchez/al i hear was SHAEV,SHAVE phuk y u spitten weak bark lyk puppiez/wen u nt got a 'hip' u claimin hoppiez/death tollz ds battle cuz u wrds nt str8 n ful of gulliez/u nt only a 'dum' u constitute multitudes of dummiez/u rap got no 'flow',wordplay,metaphorez so y am i wastn my multiez/in my last verz,i mak sure THE MUR U C,THE LES U UNDASTND!
RULEZ VIOLATED!
i gues u nid no MULTIEZ^NO^FLOWS^n^WORD PLAY/so bring ur ^SHAWTIEZ^wt her slited^THROAT^lemme phuk her lyka GAY/i may hav 2 drop low sh.t cuz even if u write mur VERZE/yurz ar lyk dead ornamentals outa its VERSE/juz luk @ur flows nt ARANGE/so DERANGE/n cnt muv wt mine @lng RANGE/damn ds battlez supoz 2b 4da RAP^LORDZ/nw al i c is a nigga OUCH^WHOREZ/u violatd da rulez by postn al ya shxt AT^ONCE/
lemme infom u if am gona los,dat'll cuz of WRONG JUDGE/ds zone's abt 2xperience a SHOT OF ONE/as i kil ds bitch bragin/shxt he phukn cald rappin/dat reminds me old sch days wen i ws raggin/u rhymez so poor,u nid sum bankin/u say am so regular/n u gona pop me wt ya celular/n have me fed on lyk a dracular/imma crest it bold 'YOU FOOL' wt out medula/hw many timez do i tel u amma dead^human/nw am cumin 2slit u throat wt a helicopter prepella/chok u wt lethal umbrella/ya want punchez/amma giv em 2u 'baptizmaly' lyk churchez/whil i sit on d tv wt my juice n crunchez/watchn hw i lamed u,confined u 2 clutchez/al i hear was SHAEV,SHAVE phuk y u spitten weak bark lyk puppiez/wen u nt got a 'hip' u claimin hoppiez/death tollz ds battle cuz u wrds nt str8 n ful of gulliez/u nt only a 'dum' u constitute multitudes of dummiez/u rap got no 'flow',wordplay,metaphorez so y am i wastn my multiez/in my last verz,i mak sure THE MUR U C,THE LES U UNDASTND!
Shaev7 2011/04/07 19:52
O.U.C.H
O . -> Only
U . -> Undisputed
C . -> Casterated
H . -> Human!
Ya rem ds ~ONE BLOOD~am use 2ds ^SP^ILL^IN^/rolin wt da ~BONE THUGS~on da stretz wt mind 2b K^ILL^IN/nigga wt da *7heads* heartz of a beast~ur soul i kip DR^ILL^IN/now i wana let u know y am so ^ILL^/drank an xpired water,neva new got sum mental P^ILL^S/i cn c u here 2suck DICKZ/it ain no TRICKZ/wateva u say,meanz same as GIMMICKS/nw im abt 2improvise my game n have it ful ^DOT^by ds time nxt wk ^MON^imma b crownd d ^KING^(DOTMONKING)/sittin @d poolside wt ripe ^CHERRY^in da month of ^MAY^watch u die in ur own setup RING(cherrymae)/am doin ds,2warn u cuz u bitch wudnt phuk wt me wen am ACID^ICK^/juz watchout n turn me ~polar^ize^ wt high voltage hav u dick^SLIT/my cumz 'bath' ur mumy PUSSY/phukd a 101yr old lady realy realy BOOBY/went2d fag club,saw u as 1of da GROUPIE/n u saw me u got scared n ran away lyk SCOOBY/
let me set d race/n ima leav u wt high pace/leavn u behind whil u head i 'll lace/u wana phuk wt me as powerful as mustard grainz/phukn sh.t u manace/u diss me imma gv a death pennance/do it ten timez n hav u death clearance/u beta shut u mouth u wag nt ashamed u were once killd by cyruz/
YA SNOOZE,YA LOOZE!
[shaev7] still attacking da mic...
JUDGEZ PLEASE! Battle over...
O.U.C.H
O . -> Only
U . -> Undisputed
C . -> Casterated
H . -> Human!
Ya rem ds ~ONE BLOOD~am use 2ds ^SP^ILL^IN^/rolin wt da ~BONE THUGS~on da stretz wt mind 2b K^ILL^IN/nigga wt da *7heads* heartz of a beast~ur soul i kip DR^ILL^IN/now i wana let u know y am so ^ILL^/drank an xpired water,neva new got sum mental P^ILL^S/i cn c u here 2suck DICKZ/it ain no TRICKZ/wateva u say,meanz same as GIMMICKS/nw im abt 2improvise my game n have it ful ^DOT^by ds time nxt wk ^MON^imma b crownd d ^KING^(DOTMONKING)/sittin @d poolside wt ripe ^CHERRY^in da month of ^MAY^watch u die in ur own setup RING(cherrymae)/am doin ds,2warn u cuz u bitch wudnt phuk wt me wen am ACID^ICK^/juz watchout n turn me ~polar^ize^ wt high voltage hav u dick^SLIT/my cumz 'bath' ur mumy PUSSY/phukd a 101yr old lady realy realy BOOBY/went2d fag club,saw u as 1of da GROUPIE/n u saw me u got scared n ran away lyk SCOOBY/
let me set d race/n ima leav u wt high pace/leavn u behind whil u head i 'll lace/u wana phuk wt me as powerful as mustard grainz/phukn sh.t u manace/u diss me imma gv a death pennance/do it ten timez n hav u death clearance/u beta shut u mouth u wag nt ashamed u were once killd by cyruz/
YA SNOOZE,YA LOOZE!
[shaev7] still attacking da mic...
JUDGEZ PLEASE! Battle over...
DotmonKing 2011/04/07 22:54
THANKS TO BOTH RAPLORDZ FOR THEIR MARVELOUS WORK, OUR JUDGES WILL PASS THEIR VIRDICT SHORTLY, THANKS
THANKS TO BOTH RAPLORDZ FOR THEIR MARVELOUS WORK, OUR JUDGES WILL PASS THEIR VIRDICT SHORTLY, THANKS
NinthElement 2011/04/08 04:57
Nice effort by Ouch but his rival's verses were overwhelming. My vote is for Shaev7.
Nice effort by Ouch but his rival's verses were overwhelming. My vote is for Shaev7.
Boet 2011/04/08 10:05
With some practise,and more experience, Ouch will make a good rapper. But Shaev7 walks off with the laurels for good wordplay and solid syntax
With some practise,and more experience, Ouch will make a good rapper. But Shaev7 walks off with the laurels for good wordplay and solid syntax
MisIndependent 2011/04/08 12:27
Hey, weldone both parties. Outch! Outch!! Outch!!!, all u did was talking, i neva saw rap in ur verses. N shaev7 u got ma vote nt coz u r gud bt coz u were beta than ur oponent. U gotta improve.
Hey, weldone both parties. Outch! Outch!! Outch!!!, all u did was talking, i neva saw rap in ur verses. N shaev7 u got ma vote nt coz u r gud bt coz u were beta than ur oponent. U gotta improve.
DotmonKing 2011/04/08 22:38
shaev7 wins by 4 votes and thus qualifies for next round. congratz to you
shaev7 wins by 4 votes and thus qualifies for next round. congratz to you
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