Raplordz Shaev7 vs Ouch
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DotmonKing
2011/04/06 20:55
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RAPLORDZ BATTLE MATCH DAY 2 RULES 1.timelimit shall be 24 hourz. 2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post having a total of 6 post after each match) 3. No interferance until after match. 4. No biting. winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round. Goodluck to you raplords
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Shaev7
2011/04/07 08:54
I cn c u ~waitin~ 4me 2post 1ST/ok ama do dat witout ~waitn 4u am batlin u wtout a buletproff VEST/lemme tel u directly,am nt gona waste punchlines/on cuz u b 1 sort lyk da guy so_sublime's/battl i did last dat almst got my rapwordz declined/u again OUCH^guez we'd a match b4 dat was a SHOUT^cuz i won u wtout HANDS^4typin as my presence DISS^STABB^ILL^ICE^ U(distabilize)/d whol 2wap knws dat b4 nw am alrdy crownd da 'rapLord'so dis nt a joke bt am DE^MOB^ILL^ICIN'^U(demobilizin)/yo got da wrd play there cuz its d orda of MOB(money over bitchez) bck 2u KID/i dnt knw wat 2 spit cuz u a SQUID/a creatur bonelez frm OCTOPUS/see me xtra odinary cuz am POPULUS/nw check El-jay's irony as he ^FLEW HIGH WIT PARACHUTE^how ya felt bitch as my ship ^SANK IN D SWIMMER'S POOL^frm my WORDS/u cn c d mic is scared of me cuz it feelz u juz recoverd frm da rapleague wounded SOREZ/how/wher do i hit u wn u body is ful of SCARZ/bruise n u neck slitted wt chlamidia^SWORDZ/no nid 4ds cuz im alrdy on d mood of CELEBRATION/nw lemme divert a lil,d world is mine,am on d book of REVELATION/wen i ^SAW^2beast cumin up outa d SEA/had 10~horns~n~7*heads~on each of it horns ther was a crown n d beast ^RAW^had resemblance of a leopard with bear's FEET(shaev wt 7heads n Raw d beast)/am juz 2 ill n hospitalized rhymez,d3mons in hell PHUKIN LUCIFER/my dick so ^so roasted^as Raw SUCKIN^wt^COOL^icer/2bad OUCH^by dis tym in 6hrz u'l b bLaCk~LiSt3d/frm da rapzone itself cuz u cnt meet up wt da tAsK~InSt3d/so u beta juz announce u^quit^n leav it 4d rAp~GiFt3d/u kno hw YUNGBOS/died urz wil b mur dan da CROSS/if u feel u gona spit EARTH's^FIRE/2bad cuz mine is gona b HELL^FIRE/u'l burn till ~eternity~datz d ~mentality~ur life's ful of ~calamitiez~com taste me 100% ful of ~salinity~ur ^INTESTINE^ripd out 2produce GEE~STRINGS/wt ur ~pancrease~apart frm da digestive system 4 BLING~BLINGS/nw leme say 1 our Father,1 HAIL MARY n 1 GLORY BE TO THE FATHER 4DS SHIP~BITCH/nail 2 d cross hav u body bittien n chopd out BIT^by^BIT/ nw am endin ds wt a STICTH^on^ur DICK/so no afraid u SNITCHD^last^on d^BEAT/ See dis cat OUCH ^BLEEDIN^DYIN/on tha rap cross of calvary//2 da cross thy sinz have KNEEL^HIM^(nailed him)/and he bleeds n died as bitch// so God our father,4giv his SIN/cuz he's very weak//oh God,hav mercy cuz he hopes on THEE/cuz trout his battle LIVEZ/wt me he STRIVES/2win bt at da end he alws CRIES;/who then can tak smiley in ds RAPZ? I'VE SAID IT ALL,WAT U GOT TO SAY,SPIT CRAP N LEMME SEAL IT
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Ouch
2011/04/07 12:47
D ring is set leme cast it open,its bn a long tym, since i pt a niga in ma oven, Shaev i hrd dt u wr caut dopn &ryt nw,u r abt 2breath death choken, Yea,dr's notn lyk Shaev7, u've bn rap dead since may7,my vibes kild u on march11, so niga say notn,if u die u r nt goin 2heaven, down,down,pit,yea,dr u'll b buried, cus u r notin bt a 4ck rap gravn, i myt nt b populr in dis batle-ish,im 2wap mudrfuckn rap-kish, u myt b regular, bt am gona pop u tru ma celulaar, u spk 2much of varnaculaar,ama bloody eat u lyk a draculaar, lasttym i hrd a name SHAEV,i tot a niga is gtn his beard SHAVE, Watch SHAEV,ur name is beard SHAVE,my dogs changd SHAEV 2VE-ASH,pusy u r a V-ASS,&am on d big-CLASS, Muderfckr u r nt 2b in dis CLASS, I hrd dm caln u LEGEND, bt 4ckr i gt a pak 4u,pusy u r LEG-END,i mn ur LEG-ENDS,so gt dent, OUCH spit venom,dats y i gt u bent,niga SHARA-4CKUP cuz u r rap-DEAD,dats y i 4ckd u,BRENT
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Ouch
2011/04/07 14:03
Shaev evn if u gt buletproof,i cn hit u cuz u r deadprove, u r afraid of ma shot,i dnt gv a 4ck of u&ur crew, u supose 2avoid me,bt i c dt kids ar nt afraid,so ama teach u 2rules of rap. 1 dnt mes wit a slepn lion. 2 dnt spk shxt wn u no u cnt flush it. Bt man u jst brk d rules i didnt read wt u wrot man,cuz i no u'l jst praise urself man, lasttym i left u,cuz ma last flow popd u a coma, nw im bk on d corner,seein lil kids spitn shxt, i dnt no wia 2hit u son, cuz ive left enuf bruises on u, u wia sayn BLA abt ur crew, so sory,u hv toys 2bk u up, tumbsup toy machines u hv dia,bt neva u mes wit ril nigas,cuz i gt dis kila atitude, i generat hy magnitud,mudrfckr gt ur substitute,ur droids&robots i kild wit 2flows, u afrad tk ur VEST, remembr u no i crest, u no u r a beast,bt 2me u r lyk a yeast,u r a clown@my feast,dts y i hit u wif ma fist.
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Ouch
2011/04/07 14:06
Bring ur adroids,bring fort ur robots. I hp dey gt more bloods,cuz ama lick dm lyk yorghurt, i dnt spk much,dats y am 2much, am 2wap rap cleanser, bring fort ur sister &i hp she's a spinster, cuz am gona cut u lyk pizza,niga pray 2JESUS,am abt cutn u wit scisors, dia's no penetenary in 2wap rap cemetary i'l kil u wif my pen-wafametory den ama create ur poster in 2wap rap rollcar let dm no hw i eat u lyk a toaster, and train u lyk a rooster fuck u sistr in my ride coaster,cuz pusy,she's a pornster&a fuckstar,haha her pusy is a hardstartsmiley, i'l advertise ur name @2wap obituary poster, leme teach hw 2pray, in ur 4ckn dead tomb,nobody gona pray,HAIL MARY,wat dey gona pray is FAIR MAY HE,cuz u mes wid gr8test HE%-) ITS OUCH CUZ IM 2MUCH:-*
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Shaev7
2011/04/07 19:16
RULEZ VIOLATED! i gues u nid no MULTIEZ^NO^FLOWS^n^WORD PLAY/so bring ur ^SHAWTIEZ^wt her slited^THROAT^lemme phuk her lyka GAY/i may hav 2 drop low sh.t cuz even if u write mur VERZE/yurz ar lyk dead ornamentals outa its VERSE/juz luk @ur flows nt ARANGE/so DERANGE/n cnt muv wt mine @lng RANGE/damn ds battlez supoz 2b 4da RAP^LORDZ/nw al i c is a nigga OUCH^WHOREZ/u violatd da rulez by postn al ya shxt AT^ONCE/ lemme infom u if am gona los,dat'll cuz of WRONG JUDGE/ds zone's abt 2xperience a SHOT OF ONE/as i kil ds bitch bragin/shxt he phukn cald rappin/dat reminds me old sch days wen i ws raggin/u rhymez so poor,u nid sum bankin/u say am so regular/n u gona pop me wt ya celular/n have me fed on lyk a dracular/imma crest it bold 'YOU FOOL' wt out medula/hw many timez do i tel u amma dead^human/nw am cumin 2slit u throat wt a helicopter prepella/chok u wt lethal umbrella/ya want punchez/amma giv em 2u 'baptizmaly' lyk churchez/whil i sit on d tv wt my juice n crunchez/watchn hw i lamed u,confined u 2 clutchez/al i hear was SHAEV,SHAVE phuk y u spitten weak bark lyk puppiez/wen u nt got a 'hip' u claimin hoppiez/death tollz ds battle cuz u wrds nt str8 n ful of gulliez/u nt only a 'dum' u constitute multitudes of dummiez/u rap got no 'flow',wordplay,metaphorez so y am i wastn my multiez/in my last verz,i mak sure THE MUR U C,THE LES U UNDASTND!
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Shaev7
2011/04/07 19:52
O.U.C.H O . -> Only U . -> Undisputed C . -> Casterated H . -> Human! Ya rem ds ~ONE BLOOD~am use 2ds ^SP^ILL^IN^/rolin wt da ~BONE THUGS~on da stretz wt mind 2b K^ILL^IN/nigga wt da *7heads* heartz of a beast~ur soul i kip DR^ILL^IN/now i wana let u know y am so ^ILL^/drank an xpired water,neva new got sum mental P^ILL^S/i cn c u here 2suck DICKZ/it ain no TRICKZ/wateva u say,meanz same as GIMMICKS/nw im abt 2improvise my game n have it ful ^DOT^by ds time nxt wk ^MON^imma b crownd d ^KING^(DOTMONKING)/sittin @d poolside wt ripe ^CHERRY^in da month of ^MAY^watch u die in ur own setup RING(cherrymae)/am doin ds,2warn u cuz u bitch wudnt phuk wt me wen am ACID^ICK^/juz watchout n turn me ~polar^ize^ wt high voltage hav u dick^SLIT/my cumz 'bath' ur mumy PUSSY/phukd a 101yr old lady realy realy BOOBY/went2d fag club,saw u as 1of da GROUPIE/n u saw me u got scared n ran away lyk SCOOBY/ let me set d race/n ima leav u wt high pace/leavn u behind whil u head i 'll lace/u wana phuk wt me as powerful as mustard grainz/phukn sh.t u manace/u diss me imma gv a death pennance/do it ten timez n hav u death clearance/u beta shut u mouth u wag nt ashamed u were once killd by cyruz/ YA SNOOZE,YA LOOZE! [shaev7] still attacking da mic... JUDGEZ PLEASE! Battle over...
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DotmonKing
2011/04/07 22:54
THANKS TO BOTH RAPLORDZ FOR THEIR MARVELOUS WORK, OUR JUDGES WILL PASS THEIR VIRDICT SHORTLY, THANKS
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NinthElement
2011/04/08 04:57
Nice effort by Ouch but his rival's verses were overwhelming. My vote is for Shaev7.
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ACIDized
2011/04/08 10:03
Shaev7's verse confounded his opponent. I vote Shaev7.
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Boet
2011/04/08 10:05
With some practise,and more experience, Ouch will make a good rapper. But Shaev7 walks off with the laurels for good wordplay and solid syntax
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MisIndependent
2011/04/08 12:27
Hey, weldone both parties. Outch! Outch!! Outch!!!, all u did was talking, i neva saw rap in ur verses. N shaev7 u got ma vote nt coz u r gud bt coz u were beta than ur oponent. U gotta improve. smiley
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DotmonKing
2011/04/08 22:38
shaev7 wins by 4 votes and thus qualifies for next round. congratz to you
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