Raplordz HNIC7 vs El-jay
DotmonKing 2011/04/05 23:39
DotmonKing 2011/04/05 23:39
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RAPLORDZ BATTLE MATCH DAY 1
RULES
1.timelimit shall be 24 hourz.
2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post having a total of 6 post after each match)
3. No interferance until after match.
4. No biting.
winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round.
Goodluck to you raplords
RULES
1.timelimit shall be 24 hourz.
2. 3 verses each by mcees (1 verse = 1 post having a total of 6 post after each match)
3. No interferance until after match.
4. No biting.
winner getz 200 pluses and qualifies for the next round.
Goodluck to you raplords
HNIC7 2011/04/06 01:27
Bang bang bang...*my door bangn soulz of El-jay n famly hangn*n beggn 4helpin*...
InTRO...
Yal tot i ws dead/i ws juz rare/cuz i ain got head/it ws slit off bare/wt a phukn 2edged sphere/nw u wana die,letz begn da blood shed/
shhh...yo str8 ^cumin^briefin eatn EM NIGGA^UP/atack me wt a ^gun^in^d face faced 2 ur face pulin EM TRIGGA ^UP/killin urself foolishly n gt buried in ya mumz PUSSY/slitn u troat drinkn em blood nt JUICY/ain got d rapz^now^i kno ds versez ar down^mr jay u cnt beat me juz let em cheapz down^so dey cn strt laffin...@us..
I wana mak it FAKE/cuz our bot life's gona b ASTAKE/my wrds crushn on u lyk ^earth^QUAKE/u seem nt 2b ashamed,ur ^skirt^FAKE^/cumin ~whack~lyka brutal ~black~is da sh.t am doin,u nt go feel my heat until my ~back~is broken n my my wind ~pipe~stolen
[i]nw leme c if i cn get da LORDSHIP/ds guy needed 2phuk,he went 2 FURGE^HIS^DICK/went away wt my fueles car,drove 2HIS^DEFIT/cn I stil do ds?/ Long,mayb ima juz let u b shady dead doodies/,imma juz appear lyka ghost u run lyk shaggy n scooby/ds juz mic warm up,lemme c wat u got cuz i kno its booby!
Bang bang bang...*my door bangn soulz of El-jay n famly hangn*n beggn 4helpin*...
InTRO...
Yal tot i ws dead/i ws juz rare/cuz i ain got head/it ws slit off bare/wt a phukn 2edged sphere/nw u wana die,letz begn da blood shed/
shhh...yo str8 ^cumin^briefin eatn EM NIGGA^UP/atack me wt a ^gun^in^d face faced 2 ur face pulin EM TRIGGA ^UP/killin urself foolishly n gt buried in ya mumz PUSSY/slitn u troat drinkn em blood nt JUICY/ain got d rapz^now^i kno ds versez ar down^mr jay u cnt beat me juz let em cheapz down^so dey cn strt laffin...@us..
I wana mak it FAKE/cuz our bot life's gona b ASTAKE/my wrds crushn on u lyk ^earth^QUAKE/u seem nt 2b ashamed,ur ^skirt^FAKE^/cumin ~whack~lyka brutal ~black~is da sh.t am doin,u nt go feel my heat until my ~back~is broken n my my wind ~pipe~stolen
[i]nw leme c if i cn get da LORDSHIP/ds guy needed 2phuk,he went 2 FURGE^HIS^DICK/went away wt my fueles car,drove 2HIS^DEFIT/cn I stil do ds?/ Long,mayb ima juz let u b shady dead doodies/,imma juz appear lyka ghost u run lyk shaggy n scooby/ds juz mic warm up,lemme c wat u got cuz i kno its booby!
El-jay 2011/04/06 05:27
am bak to kill, done wit my VACATION/ i had to go kill ur papa bak der wit da CAVE MEN/i fed his bones to da RAVEN/datz y i didnt wana spit 1ST/ not scared of death i once died of THIRST/am not good am da BEST/ give u some cheap wordz to put u tru a TEST/i've been here too long so i'l show you what to do and how to do it/i spit outta d world RHYMEZ/ i wana marry aliens not earth WIVES/ like a cat i got 9 LIVES/ u got none, so i'l spit very sharp LINES/ i dnt move, i'l let my wordz crack tru ur NECK/ so sharp it'l cause a WRECK/ BRACE urself cos now ur LIFE is LACED/ if life is a RACE i assure u ur LIFE is WASTE/ i got my words tied to ur WAIST/ i'l wipe u out like copy and PASTE/ put ya in da spiritual REALM wit demons there in HELL/ am sick but my rhymes are WELL/ my rhymes gravy, enter ur dick and SWELL/ tear ur out ur MICK pipe and den it SMELLS/i spit rhymes dat can fill up 2 WELLS/ leave ya ears ringing like BELLS/modafuka lemme see wat u got dat i hope u can SPELL
am bak to kill, done wit my VACATION/ i had to go kill ur papa bak der wit da CAVE MEN/i fed his bones to da RAVEN/datz y i didnt wana spit 1ST/ not scared of death i once died of THIRST/am not good am da BEST/ give u some cheap wordz to put u tru a TEST/i've been here too long so i'l show you what to do and how to do it/i spit outta d world RHYMEZ/ i wana marry aliens not earth WIVES/ like a cat i got 9 LIVES/ u got none, so i'l spit very sharp LINES/ i dnt move, i'l let my wordz crack tru ur NECK/ so sharp it'l cause a WRECK/ BRACE urself cos now ur LIFE is LACED/ if life is a RACE i assure u ur LIFE is WASTE/ i got my words tied to ur WAIST/ i'l wipe u out like copy and PASTE/ put ya in da spiritual REALM wit demons there in HELL/ am sick but my rhymes are WELL/ my rhymes gravy, enter ur dick and SWELL/ tear ur out ur MICK pipe and den it SMELLS/i spit rhymes dat can fill up 2 WELLS/ leave ya ears ringing like BELLS/modafuka lemme see wat u got dat i hope u can SPELL
HNIC7 2011/04/06 09:01
Bin so weak cuz i ws PYRANOID/nw im bck wt tripplez n multiez heavier dan 1 STERIOD/lemme strt by ^holdin ur soul^4dsin me cuzt u ur LIFE/nw HNIC s bck wt da rhyme ~cutter~amma cum tak u n ur WIFE/lol,nt maried bt u wer gav birth tru XPIRED^SPERM/imma nt cum in piece,cumin 2tak watz mine play lyk a DESIRED^GEM/u rap xperimen was ~backfired~hav u turnd 2a LILIPUT/juz wok n paste wt acid n SPIT @U/conect a rope tru ur ^neck^n trow u down da MOUNTAIN/yeah datz blood ^shed^cuz m evil of FOUNTAIN/ur wrds ain evn touch me,dey WHACK^N^SHITTY/wana kil first,i hav my dick ^STABBD^N^urs^SLITTY/lemme play wt da rhymez a lil bit usin b.L/u game so dirty n nids 2b cleand,n ima use sum c.L/feedin u wt ACID^SOUP pasin out DEATH/amm born n assigned 2kill u PLANIN^COUP^ bt itz gona b flashbck wt ur HEAD/imma ^proffessional^XCECUTIONAL/ima mak ur life ^conditional^wt^TESTIMONIAL/of death CERTIFICATe/nw u mama is da Sudjeckt^n u da PREDICATE/eatin u ear RAW/lyka rat,n tear u wt my CLAW/nw u spit rap wt 100% FLOP/drain ur blood in u body,cnt even fil a glas CUP/am da illest dead raper here,buried wt my GLOC/so no phukn wt me in death,amma sieze ur breath wt a POP/
cn i stil play/wt ds words? Hey jay/its game/ova so drop da pad^stay/wide awake/cuz my words ar thief-tain(chieftain)/crownd in da v^ill^age/whoopin u b4 n even t^ill^d^ate/ovatak da world's richezt man b^ill^g^ate/nw u said u wana sp^ill^flame/mine's gona talisma~ hav u n ur sp^ill^tamed/nw its HNIC havn ds celeb lyk dr^ill^day(dre day)/tru ur heart n s^ill^ur^game/havn u smoke ethane* lol n light up dry^hay/in ur tommy,shaev got my brain/f^ill^ed wt gassoline~wt RAW lit~match 4his^blaze/nw my brainz/so phuckn xploded n damaged/n itz u amm cumin 2fite wt ds great insane/so imma b shootn my words frm a short range/n hav u as wel derange/cuz ur brain is porouz,cnt wtstand ds sage/nt even wana c da v^ill^b4 da ^ain/cuz am 2 jeopardouz 4ds game/nw a homie drop dead,rip nate/died as a tru homie n lived by hs name/u gona die so shamefuly,by falin frm a skate/wt u head off 2da east,u dick 2d north,went 2south n it phuckn n west ur heart daz amaze/nw signed death,cuz ima cum bck back 2polute ds place!
Bin so weak cuz i ws PYRANOID/nw im bck wt tripplez n multiez heavier dan 1 STERIOD/lemme strt by ^holdin ur soul^4dsin me cuzt u ur LIFE/nw HNIC s bck wt da rhyme ~cutter~amma cum tak u n ur WIFE/lol,nt maried bt u wer gav birth tru XPIRED^SPERM/imma nt cum in piece,cumin 2tak watz mine play lyk a DESIRED^GEM/u rap xperimen was ~backfired~hav u turnd 2a LILIPUT/juz wok n paste wt acid n SPIT @U/conect a rope tru ur ^neck^n trow u down da MOUNTAIN/yeah datz blood ^shed^cuz m evil of FOUNTAIN/ur wrds ain evn touch me,dey WHACK^N^SHITTY/wana kil first,i hav my dick ^STABBD^N^urs^SLITTY/lemme play wt da rhymez a lil bit usin b.L/u game so dirty n nids 2b cleand,n ima use sum c.L/feedin u wt ACID^SOUP pasin out DEATH/amm born n assigned 2kill u PLANIN^COUP^ bt itz gona b flashbck wt ur HEAD/imma ^proffessional^XCECUTIONAL/ima mak ur life ^conditional^wt^TESTIMONIAL/of death CERTIFICATe/nw u mama is da Sudjeckt^n u da PREDICATE/eatin u ear RAW/lyka rat,n tear u wt my CLAW/nw u spit rap wt 100% FLOP/drain ur blood in u body,cnt even fil a glas CUP/am da illest dead raper here,buried wt my GLOC/so no phukn wt me in death,amma sieze ur breath wt a POP/
cn i stil play/wt ds words? Hey jay/its game/ova so drop da pad^stay/wide awake/cuz my words ar thief-tain(chieftain)/crownd in da v^ill^age/whoopin u b4 n even t^ill^d^ate/ovatak da world's richezt man b^ill^g^ate/nw u said u wana sp^ill^flame/mine's gona talisma~ hav u n ur sp^ill^tamed/nw its HNIC havn ds celeb lyk dr^ill^day(dre day)/tru ur heart n s^ill^ur^game/havn u smoke ethane* lol n light up dry^hay/in ur tommy,shaev got my brain/f^ill^ed wt gassoline~wt RAW lit~match 4his^blaze/nw my brainz/so phuckn xploded n damaged/n itz u amm cumin 2fite wt ds great insane/so imma b shootn my words frm a short range/n hav u as wel derange/cuz ur brain is porouz,cnt wtstand ds sage/nt even wana c da v^ill^b4 da ^ain/cuz am 2 jeopardouz 4ds game/nw a homie drop dead,rip nate/died as a tru homie n lived by hs name/u gona die so shamefuly,by falin frm a skate/wt u head off 2da east,u dick 2d north,went 2south n it phuckn n west ur heart daz amaze/nw signed death,cuz ima cum bck back 2polute ds place!
El-jay 2011/04/06 10:50
watz wit da long wordz, go strait to da point! all i see is BLUH BLUH BLUH,/ i dnt giv a fuck wat u say any MUR/i dnt tink dis is even a WAR/its me exterminating u dats wat it is/ ur wordz too girly, so dry i had to water em wit my HORMONES/ dude i tink u got NO BONES/ u cn neva step da jay level in da FLOW ZONE/ i dnt give advice FOR FREE/dats why after dis i'l dig u in 6 feet DOWN DEEP/ go drink some LIQUID/ den i punch u in da stomach till u cough out vomit FLUID/ i dont like being BULLIED/ am not BULL i drink acid till am FULL/ i eat WOOL n come wrap u in it till u PUKE/ FLUKE, LOOK u're notin but a ZOOK to me/ i'l smack u wit a big BOOK my slaves brot 4 me/ i read so wise, i can ask u questions u cannot ANSWER/ modafuka u are not a rapper u have CANCER!!!/hahahaa, now come eat a dick, its d cure, its so pure, ur mam sucked from it wen doin her MANICURE...post ur last shxt lemme tel u sometin MORE,,,
watz wit da long wordz, go strait to da point! all i see is BLUH BLUH BLUH,/ i dnt giv a fuck wat u say any MUR/i dnt tink dis is even a WAR/its me exterminating u dats wat it is/ ur wordz too girly, so dry i had to water em wit my HORMONES/ dude i tink u got NO BONES/ u cn neva step da jay level in da FLOW ZONE/ i dnt give advice FOR FREE/dats why after dis i'l dig u in 6 feet DOWN DEEP/ go drink some LIQUID/ den i punch u in da stomach till u cough out vomit FLUID/ i dont like being BULLIED/ am not BULL i drink acid till am FULL/ i eat WOOL n come wrap u in it till u PUKE/ FLUKE, LOOK u're notin but a ZOOK to me/ i'l smack u wit a big BOOK my slaves brot 4 me/ i read so wise, i can ask u questions u cannot ANSWER/ modafuka u are not a rapper u have CANCER!!!/hahahaa, now come eat a dick, its d cure, its so pure, ur mam sucked from it wen doin her MANICURE...post ur last shxt lemme tel u sometin MORE,,,
HNIC7 2011/04/06 11:56
I luv dis NO ^PURE/my mama need NO^MUR/o damn ur rhymez SO^OB^SCURE/dey nt evn sharp~damn SO^BLUR/nw u say u wana tel me sumtin.. I guez is hw u ate GOLDEN^MORE/stabbd u wt my 'name' leav u wt a ROTEN^SORE/yea my words ar 2 long 4 u 2 TRECK^DA^LENGHT/u bitch chockd u wen phukn,she wrapd ya NECK^wt^HER^BREAST/yeah HNIC bck wt da mic~ datz NEVER^DA^LESS/u a creature of a gay,u FATHER^is^A^LES^(lesbia)/got shot wt a revolver* 607 bulletz^ws removed frm MA^CHEST/ left wt 707 remains,each sneeze it shootz u wt DA^REST/nw its HNIC wt da TEFLON^VEST/u nt a rapper,on DSTV last wk live on air CNN u were CROWNED^SEX^BEST/nw u cumin wt ur dick 2spit PUSSY/2me,bulsht i ain LUCY/nid 2drink xpired milk,go 4ha titz dey JUICY/haha sh.t i say AMUSE^ME/u cnt us dat even if u ABUSE^ME/am a war lord n am sendn my desciple 2u GADDAFI/i got da real mic on,urz is ur MAMA's^DICK/metaphore spot cuz she phukd ur PAPA's^TITS/irony chokin u neck as ur gurl smooshd ya BOOBS/so hungry go search 4sum premature GOOSE/xterminatin^me while xcommunicate^thee,u tommy wt ACID whil i gv u mur FU^EL(elfuego)/died AT^IT ur body snt 2 HEL/
its game over cuz my LAS^VERSE^i spit^WORSE^am blesed wt RAP^CURZ^u beta nid 2 re-^HEARSE^dnt kno who gav yal ^BURST^2^CURZE^cuz u muthafucker beta say^US^am juz 2 ^RUFF^am gona kil da bitch dat ate my^DICK^datz my ^SHIT^bitch ^QUIT^ds ~legendary~BITCH^crown u wt ^THORNS^hoe b worze dan Jesus^SHIT^make u drink ur^PISS^force u eat ur ^SHIT^cooked in da toilet my rappin ^BEAT^gv u da ^HIT^multiple smackdown wt 1000 degree celciouz am gona make u feal da ^HEAT^trap u in a^LIFT^(elevator) die ^BITCH^til nobdy know cuz i ain nigga dat u phukin ^WITH^its da VILLAIN!
H.N.I.C REP...
CASTASTROPHE IS THE ODER OF THE GAME!!!
-mic funeral- letz go 4da studio ceremony!
I luv dis NO ^PURE/my mama need NO^MUR/o damn ur rhymez SO^OB^SCURE/dey nt evn sharp~damn SO^BLUR/nw u say u wana tel me sumtin.. I guez is hw u ate GOLDEN^MORE/stabbd u wt my 'name' leav u wt a ROTEN^SORE/yea my words ar 2 long 4 u 2 TRECK^DA^LENGHT/u bitch chockd u wen phukn,she wrapd ya NECK^wt^HER^BREAST/yeah HNIC bck wt da mic~ datz NEVER^DA^LESS/u a creature of a gay,u FATHER^is^A^LES^(lesbia)/got shot wt a revolver* 607 bulletz^ws removed frm MA^CHEST/ left wt 707 remains,each sneeze it shootz u wt DA^REST/nw its HNIC wt da TEFLON^VEST/u nt a rapper,on DSTV last wk live on air CNN u were CROWNED^SEX^BEST/nw u cumin wt ur dick 2spit PUSSY/2me,bulsht i ain LUCY/nid 2drink xpired milk,go 4ha titz dey JUICY/haha sh.t i say AMUSE^ME/u cnt us dat even if u ABUSE^ME/am a war lord n am sendn my desciple 2u GADDAFI/i got da real mic on,urz is ur MAMA's^DICK/metaphore spot cuz she phukd ur PAPA's^TITS/irony chokin u neck as ur gurl smooshd ya BOOBS/so hungry go search 4sum premature GOOSE/xterminatin^me while xcommunicate^thee,u tommy wt ACID whil i gv u mur FU^EL(elfuego)/died AT^IT ur body snt 2 HEL/
its game over cuz my LAS^VERSE^i spit^WORSE^am blesed wt RAP^CURZ^u beta nid 2 re-^HEARSE^dnt kno who gav yal ^BURST^2^CURZE^cuz u muthafucker beta say^US^am juz 2 ^RUFF^am gona kil da bitch dat ate my^DICK^datz my ^SHIT^bitch ^QUIT^ds ~legendary~BITCH^crown u wt ^THORNS^hoe b worze dan Jesus^SHIT^make u drink ur^PISS^force u eat ur ^SHIT^cooked in da toilet my rappin ^BEAT^gv u da ^HIT^multiple smackdown wt 1000 degree celciouz am gona make u feal da ^HEAT^trap u in a^LIFT^(elevator) die ^BITCH^til nobdy know cuz i ain nigga dat u phukin ^WITH^its da VILLAIN!
H.N.I.C REP...
CASTASTROPHE IS THE ODER OF THE GAME!!!
-mic funeral- letz go 4da studio ceremony!
El-jay 2011/04/06 13:12
der u go again wit da long STORIES/ man wats wrong wit u? i tink u papa's dick must hav been rammed by a 5 LORRIES/ and ur mama got too much WORRIES/ a piece of advice, go home to ur mam, pour sum cum into ha pussy n DRINK FROM IT/ take my words seriously come EAT FROM IT/ ur words not hot lemme show u how to get HEAT FROM IT/ u sum real piece of dick ain't u?/ ok look, am d owner of RAP i sipt lots of CRAP/ ur rhymes are WACK u like a bitch screaming QUACK!!!/ fuck modafack, u will die with ur fucking ASS, i'l press it down and plant some GRASS/ my rhymes come with a lot of MASS/ u cant carry the weight dats u'll never PASS/i can spit long shxt too u COCKSUCKER/Am so sick MODAFUKA/i take knif n cut some WATER/look, even my car is RETARDED/my brains r so ill i got em DISCARDED/i take a parachute n jump into d SKY HIGH/amma chinese nigga u cn call me SHANGHAI/run me with a plane n i WON'T DIE/i got shot 5 times in a drive by
i shot bak n left him dead with ONE EYE/amma rip diz shxt till i got no blood left/modafuka hate me i call u HOMO/i dont hav money i steal a VOLVO/hate d sound of dat car it soundz like BRO BRO/i drive screamin at d bitchez HO HO/u cnt inject me becos i got NO VAIN IN DA NECK/doctors go mad becos my BRAIN IS A WRECK/niggas like u get scared ,they piss and GET WET/
. DEATH CERIFICATE (HNIC7) SIGNED BY EL~JAY .
der u go again wit da long STORIES/ man wats wrong wit u? i tink u papa's dick must hav been rammed by a 5 LORRIES/ and ur mama got too much WORRIES/ a piece of advice, go home to ur mam, pour sum cum into ha pussy n DRINK FROM IT/ take my words seriously come EAT FROM IT/ ur words not hot lemme show u how to get HEAT FROM IT/ u sum real piece of dick ain't u?/ ok look, am d owner of RAP i sipt lots of CRAP/ ur rhymes are WACK u like a bitch screaming QUACK!!!/ fuck modafack, u will die with ur fucking ASS, i'l press it down and plant some GRASS/ my rhymes come with a lot of MASS/ u cant carry the weight dats u'll never PASS/i can spit long shxt too u COCKSUCKER/Am so sick MODAFUKA/i take knif n cut some WATER/look, even my car is RETARDED/my brains r so ill i got em DISCARDED/i take a parachute n jump into d SKY HIGH/amma chinese nigga u cn call me SHANGHAI/run me with a plane n i WON'T DIE/i got shot 5 times in a drive by
i shot bak n left him dead with ONE EYE/amma rip diz shxt till i got no blood left/modafuka hate me i call u HOMO/i dont hav money i steal a VOLVO/hate d sound of dat car it soundz like BRO BRO/i drive screamin at d bitchez HO HO/u cnt inject me becos i got NO VAIN IN DA NECK/doctors go mad becos my BRAIN IS A WRECK/niggas like u get scared ,they piss and GET WET/
. DEATH CERIFICATE (HNIC7) SIGNED BY EL~JAY .
DotmonKing 2011/04/06 21:03
THANKS TO BOTH OF RAPLORDZ FOR THEIR MARVELOUS WORK, OUR JUDGES WILL PASS THEIR VIRDICT SHORTLY, THANKS
THANKS TO BOTH OF RAPLORDZ FOR THEIR MARVELOUS WORK, OUR JUDGES WILL PASS THEIR VIRDICT SHORTLY, THANKS
Boet 2011/04/06 21:30
Both competitors had good construction, rhyming and fluency. However, one contestant's words fell easier on the ear. El-jay
Both competitors had good construction, rhyming and fluency. However, one contestant's words fell easier on the ear. El-jay
DotmonKing 2011/04/07 14:35
it was a close contest but after weighting all the flows, punchlines and the entire depth of lyrics... i'll go for el-jay
it was a close contest but after weighting all the flows, punchlines and the entire depth of lyrics... i'll go for el-jay
NinthElement 2011/04/08 03:05
A high calibre of creativity from both sides, good show. I'd say HNIC7 made more effort and each verse had a greater impact than the last, while El-jay was consistent throughout and more precise with his punches. It's a tough call but I'll be controversial and vote for HNIC7.
A high calibre of creativity from both sides, good show. I'd say HNIC7 made more effort and each verse had a greater impact than the last, while El-jay was consistent throughout and more precise with his punches. It's a tough call but I'll be controversial and vote for HNIC7.
MisIndependent 2011/04/08 12:38
Gud work guys... Hnick was gud, bt u neva arange ur ryhms 2 fit in2 ma imaginatn. I go 4 E-jay. Kip dis up d sky is ur steping stone.
Gud work guys... Hnick was gud, bt u neva arange ur ryhms 2 fit in2 ma imaginatn. I go 4 E-jay. Kip dis up d sky is ur steping stone.
DotmonKing 2011/04/08 22:36
El-jay won by 3 votes from our 5 judges and thus qualifies for next round. Congratz to you!
El-jay won by 3 votes from our 5 judges and thus qualifies for next round. Congratz to you!
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