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Heart Touching......

____THe.bosS · Mar 7, 2011 13:42 21 143
____THe.bosS OP
Mar 7, 2011 13:42
I was a just-born and she was Twenty-Five, Though we were we, we were one. I would cry out in Latin and she would respond in Greek, I would learn nothing but she never got tired to teach. I was surrounded by monsters eager to pull my cheek, but they would vanish the moment I was wet and weep. She would come running and hold me in her arms, as if I had won the contest of the charms. Now I was able to walk and chew, and hey, I was two. I and she could now understand each other, I was her everything and she needed no other. I would try to walk and fall down, But knowing she was with me, the fear of getting hurt was now gone. We still could not converse that effectively, But she would understand my needs so easily. I could now roam about free, because now I have turned three. I was ready to join a new world, my academic life was now gonna mould. She would dress me as best as a prince, but when I would come back, she would need at least an hour to rinse. I was now able to talk, I was a ferry and she was my dock. I still remember the child, whose shirt I had tore, Hey buddy, I have turned four. I now came home a little late, Nevertheless finding her waiting at the gate. She would hug me and carry me in her arms, it felt like flying through the farms. We now did the homework together, I would spoil the home and she used to work. Years passed and now I was fifteen, and with each year I would forget to lean. I wouldn't care for what she said, because now I had become mean. She would ask me to study for a good future, but I was busy in a different culture. Now I had many shes in my life, I dreamed of having one of them as my wife. I changed a lot which she did not teach, She would try to hug me but I was out of reach. She still waited for me at the gate, but I would look at her with utmost hate. She would be awake till late in the night, because I wasn't home, I was in a fight. She had so much to scold, but she never did say, hoping to find me better the next day. Time went on and now I am grown, lost in the world of my own. I and she, between us have a river, I have left her for my career. When I was young, for me, she sacrificed her ambitions, but I don't care, I now have my own mission. I am not with her now, I am in a different city, she is so old now but I don't even pity. She needs me now but I am nowhere to find, in the race for appraisal, I have become blind. In a few years from now, I will be two, there will be in my life someone new. Then I'll forget even to bother, I am her son and she is my Mother.
21 replies
Tickle-me-elmo-hehe
Mar 7, 2011 13:49
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Awwwwe....so nice..smiley
--CaTeRpILLaR--
Mar 7, 2011 13:49
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smiley bravo hunsmiley
Saphire_flames
Mar 7, 2011 13:50
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it shows the truth smiley
AprilSnow
Mar 7, 2011 13:53
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Oh,really heart touching.Truly,mother's love is unconditional and incomparable.But,sad to say,some children can hardly see and feel it..
sydazer
Mar 7, 2011 14:01
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Great 1 nd sad 2 lets houner our motherz
Alebi
Mar 7, 2011 14:21
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smiley i like it smiley
lady_xyrelle
Mar 7, 2011 15:03
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best topic ever....
Barbiecute
Mar 7, 2011 16:01
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realli vry touching ...nice topic dr ..keep it up
LoneLy_heArt
Mar 7, 2011 16:45
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thanks 4 remembering .by the way i had read it already smiley
Rohit
Mar 7, 2011 17:08
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_subrat_: thanks 4 remembering .by the way i had read it already smiley
this poem had writen by subrat smiley
chocolate.boy
Mar 7, 2011 17:40
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Very nice! smiley . .
Rilwan
Mar 7, 2011 18:57
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smileyvery touching. . But is it real or just a fiction? smiley
Sweet_Divyanka
Mar 7, 2011 19:02
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Lovely smiley
Laketempest
Mar 7, 2011 19:03
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good bro .......
OceanGoddes
Mar 7, 2011 20:04
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Okay nice...
LoneLy_heArt
Mar 8, 2011 02:05
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Rohit: this poem had writen by subrat smiley
smiley .
toto-06
Mar 11, 2011 03:59
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i míss u
-Annie-
Mar 12, 2011 01:10
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.yes. so nice
wiLLyRockz
Jun 20, 2012 15:06
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Waves
Jun 20, 2012 15:33
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Thumbs up 2 u.