THE RIPPER
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AGONYandEXTASY
2010/03/21 10:31
Probably this topic should be in Lyrics City or Dolphins Cry,but i doubt since is a quite dark story. So enjoy if u like it! *oh and never turn your back!
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AGONYandEXTASY
2010/03/21 10:56
You're in for surprise You're in for a shock In London Town streets When there's darkness and fog When you least expect me And you turn your back I'll atack I smile when i'm sneaking Through shaddows by the wall I laugh when i'm kreeping But you wont hear me at all All hear my warning Never turn your back On the ripper You'll soon shake with fear Never knowing if i'm near I'm sly and i'm shameless Nocturnal and nameless Except for the ripper Or if you like jack the knife Any back alley street Is where we'll probably meet Underneath a gas lamp Where the air's cold and danp I'm a nasty surprise I'm a devil in disquise I'm a footstep at night I'm a scream of the fright All hear my warning Never turn your back On the ripper (by Judas Priest)
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Laketempest
2010/03/21 11:45
I was thinking about putting it in dolphincry as its a nice dark poem like one, but its pretty dark words so its better suited for the darkworld lol. Well i must say i like how you put the dark words. Nice one smiley
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-DeMoN_OvErLoRd-
2010/03/22 05:38
Yeh nice one smiley
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EllaiZa
2010/03/22 08:22
I like this... e0w !
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AGONYandEXTASY
2010/03/22 10:19
How many times r u willing to move this topic again over and over? smiley
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Demonical
2010/04/02 17:40
wonderful
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Honesty2063
2010/04/05 12:07
AGONYandEXTASY: You're in for surprise You're in for a shock In London Town streets When there's darkness and fog When you least expect me And you turn your back I'll atack I smile when i'm sneaking Through shaddows by the wall I laugh when i'm kreeping But you wont hear me at all All hear my warning Never turn your back On the ripper You'll soon shake with fear Never knowing if i'm near I'm sly and i'm shameless Nocturnal and nameless Except for the ripper Or if you like jack the knife Any back alley street Is where we'll probably meet Underneath a gas lamp Where the air's cold and danp I'm a nasty surprise I'm a devil in disquise I'm a footstep at night I'm a scream of the fright All hear my warning Never turn your back On the ripper (by Judas Priest)
nyc poem
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latrine
2010/04/06 11:55
good onesmiley
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donprecious
2010/04/06 12:38
scary huh smiley
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donprecious
2010/04/06 12:40
good one though smiley
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Godric
2010/04/18 15:51
Good to read twice or more.
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AGONYandEXTASY
2010/06/22 15:46
Saviola: Good to read twice or more.
Yep.
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ACIDized
2010/06/23 06:19
black metal song?
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AGONYandEXTASY
2010/06/23 09:36
me_against_myself: black metal song?
Not quite is a good old heavy metal melodrama from '70s with fantastic solos and vocal.
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Fluxion
2011/02/06 18:28
Yeh nice one
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_ShAnE_StArK_
2013/09/13 14:36
wow!
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