My Only Wish
Maryam
2017/11/24 15:30
If I could have just one wish,
I will wish to wake up to
The smell of your breath on my neck,
The warmth of your lips on my cheeks,
The touch of your fingers on my skin,
The feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that
Feeling with anyone other than you.
Sarcastic
2017/11/24 15:49Thats heavenly wishes..
saahir
2017/11/24 15:57excellent composition.
saahir
2017/11/24 15:58you are a good poet -clap-
Maryam
2017/11/24 16:03Thanks 💮
Maryam
2017/11/24 16:04Good poet is u.. I'm learning 4rm u saahir
saahir
2017/11/24 18:09 Maryam: Good poet is u.. I'm learning 4rm u saahir
No dear we have many here who's poetry skills are better than me. We have PRINCESS SUNI, Lelsi, our admin jaQui madame , Abhiraj and many more by whom I'm inspired and trying to follow their tracks.
Sarcastic
2017/11/24 18:30 saahir:
No dear we have many here who's poetry skills are better than me. We have PRINCESS SUNI, Lelsi, our admin jaQui madame , Abhiraj and many more by whom I'm inspired and trying to follow their tracks.
u forgot to mention my name..
saahir
2017/11/24 18:35
saahir
2017/11/24 19:28I've mentioned only the names about whom people are unknown. You are a shining star, every one knows you brother.
Sarcastic: u forgot to mention my name..
Sarcastic
2017/11/24 19:30Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
saahir
2017/11/24 19:40 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
Its not true I've read your topics, also the comments. How can you say that, no one knows u.
tRuEbLuE
2017/11/25 22:17 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
Anyone can tell
They know you well
Lelsi
2017/11/28 18:37 Sarcastic: Lol.. No one knows me except u,trueblue n suni.. N none knows me actually..
I believe I know you very well.hug.
Sarcastic
2017/11/29 02:12 Lelsi:
I believe I know you very well.hug.
U r always offline..
ABHIRAJ
2017/12/02 14:49may god bring your wish true.smile...nice poem,keep posting frnd
saahir
2018/06/25 18:49 Sarcastic: U r always offline..
after your comment I found her online.
jaQui
2018/06/25 22:42
Beautiful .flower1.
Maryam
2018/06/26 05:20 saahir:
after your comment I found her online.
Yeah She's online Saahir .lol.
Maryam
2018/06/26 05:20 jaQui:
Beautiful .flower1.
Thank you JaQui 
krack
2019/09/25 00:14Beautiful Lines :)
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