Thirsty Lips by saahir 2014/02/06 16:38
Thirst of .blov...
Made my lips thirsty..
Waiting..
Waiting..
And waiting..
My search..
Never ends..
Though I'm tired..

Am I searching..
Water in desert..
No heart feels my pain..
No ear listens my cry..
Am I shouting in desert..
Am I shouting in no man's land..
Thirsty are my lips..
Thirsty is my .heart...
KingFISHER 2014/02/06 16:43
Hope soon you wlll found the water source. Best of luck!
Crownstar 2014/02/06 16:50
don't worry, the pirates map will direct u to the water source
best of luck with ur compass .thumbsup.
-LILY- 2014/02/06 17:12
nice...... /smiley
Naaz 2014/02/06 17:24
Oh ho soo sad mr.thirsty ,wish ur desire 'll fulfill soon .
Kayli 2014/02/06 17:37
Very nice frnd /smiley
jaQui 2014/02/06 17:51
Thirsty lips n hungry heart,,/smiley nice poem
NIGHT_ANGEL 2014/02/06 18:05
so nice.claps.heart touching feelings in desert/smiley
-Marizelle- 2014/02/06 19:33
Beautiful poem >saahir/smiley
Aita 2014/02/06 20:03
Well done.. Its lovely
_NiGhTmArE_aNgEl_ 2014/02/07 04:38
So nice/smiley
Trax 2014/02/07 06:34
niiccee
Georginia 2014/02/07 13:14
Nice lines bro/smiley
ladyme 2014/02/07 18:31
Those who seek will find. Nice poem saahir
The_Torpid 2014/02/21 19:25
Wait for the Rain bro..... .romance.
roza 2014/02/21 20:00
Really
saahir 2014/02/21 20:04
Quote: roza: Really

Yes, itz.
roza 2014/02/21 20:05
See my profile pic....its also a thirsty lips.....hmmmm
saahir 2014/02/21 20:15
Quote: roza: See my profile pic....its also a thirsty lips.....hmmmm

really..
roza 2014/02/21 20:18
Quote: saahir:
really..

Ya doesn't Looks???
saahir 2014/02/21 20:19
Quote: roza:
Ya doesn't Looks???

I feel it2.
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