I love you 'O' my Mom

I love you 'O' my Mom by saahir 2012/03/08 14:32
I love you
'O' my Mom
As much
I love my God
I remember you
As much I remember my God
I remember once I was hungry
I ask you for food
You gave me a cup of milk with piece of bread
I looked at your face
You read some line on my forehead
You smiled & said "Eat my child"
You pointed your finger towards cooking vessels
Both were covered with lids
I finished my breakfast
You went out
I removed the lids
Both vessels were EMPTY

I cried in a sky breaking voice
'O' My God

saahir 2012/04/09 05:54

Quote: Male1974: nice story..really poetic.

these lines are from my true life story.

saahir 2012/04/09 06:01
Both poems are from lines of my true story.

Amywilliam 2012/04/09 06:30
touchy

cmail 2012/04/09 06:45

Quote: saahir: I love you'O' my MomAs muchI love my GodI remember youAs much I remember my GodI remember once I was hungryI ask you for foodYou gave me a cup of milk with piece of breadI looked at you faceYou read some line on my foreheadYou smiled & said "Eat my child"You pointed your finger towards cooking vesselsBoth were covered with lidsI finished my breakfastShe went outI removed the lidsBoth vessels were EMPTYI cried in a sky breaking voice'O' My God

hearts touching poem yes in this world mom is mom nothing to be comparison no one can't replace her.her place above the god.... this poem above all poem my karma for it

Unic0rn_GirL 2012/04/09 07:36

Quote: saahir: I love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God

I remeber
When I was in need to pay
My school fees
You went to money lender
You mortgaged your ornaments
And I paid my school fees

I remember
Your eyes were flooded with tears
In gratitute to Almighty God

I remember the way
You saved my carrier

l love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God

Heart touching great mom /smiley

Sweetcapricorn 2012/04/09 09:30
-up- nice poem i like it /smiley

thanx for sharing.

Rosay 2012/04/12 04:05
senty

Shush14 2012/04/12 11:31
awesome poem..

Misty 2012/04/14 15:42
I think its brilliant especailly 4 payin tribute 2 the most important person in ur life the 1 person who helped gav u life. Words of truth spoken here.