I love you 'O' my Mom
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saahir
2012/03/08 14:32
I love you
'O' my Mom
As much
I love my God
I remember you
As much I remember my God
I remember once I was hungry
I ask you for food
You gave me a cup of milk with piece of bread
I looked at your face
You read some line on my forehead
You smiled & said "Eat my child"
You pointed your finger towards cooking vessels
Both were covered with lids
I finished my breakfast
You went out
I removed the lids
Both vessels were EMPTY

I cried in a sky breaking voice
'O' My God


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Sweet_Divyanka
2012/03/08 20:37
Wow so touching /smiley
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kazzy
2012/03/10 17:37
You have to love ur parent of course
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saahir
2012/03/10 18:24
kazzy: You have to love ur parent of course
Thnx Bro. But non of them alive.
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Liliyanababyg
2012/03/11 15:40
Honestly,that so cul!!
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Shush14
2012/04/01 00:24
Short heart touching.
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fiya
2012/04/03 17:46
Oh,a touching poem.You r lucky to have such a mom
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maryanne
2012/04/03 18:00
Datz nice
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Bharela
2012/04/03 20:17
oh wow... Mothers r angels sent 4rm above
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Dragon358
2012/04/04 04:23
good realy heart touching this time.horse.
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RoBinH0oD
2012/04/04 05:04
Its Wonderfull&Heart Touching. Thanks.
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aprillia
2012/04/04 05:11
make me homesick.....
mama......i missed u so much...../smiley
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_N0t0rri0uS_NaVI_
2012/04/04 17:54
Miss my mom /smiley
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Yizreel
2012/04/04 19:12
Indeed , they are angels . *roses*
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/05 07:50
Mom is God...nyc loving poem /smiley
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saahir
2012/04/06 15:13
fiya: Oh,a touching poem.You r lucky to have such a mom
no dear she is no more.
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saahir
2012/04/09 05:37
I love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God

I remeber
When I was in need to pay
My school fees
You went to money lender
You mortgaged your ornaments
And I paid my school fees

I remember
Your eyes were flooded with tears
In gratitute to Almighty God

I remember the way
You saved my career

l love you
'O' my mom
As much
I love my God
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KingFISHER
2012/04/09 05:46
Parents r most honourable person in ths world.
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Trax
2012/04/09 05:47
saahir: Thnx Bro. But non of them alive.
/smiley very bad saahir
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Male1974
2012/04/09 05:47
nice story..really poetic.
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Trax
2012/04/09 05:48
heart touching poem
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