FARAH2012/01/23 03:11 Wel d0ne bro ! U have c0nducted a very detaild research 0n her eyes . Oo b khairiat to hai naa ? ? ? ? ? ? Any ways , mazak 1 traf , gud p0etry . !
Atusofjames2012/01/28 16:50 u got a gud time make gud use of it. I mean u got a fresh laaadyyy.
Pr1ya2012/02/01 16:16 Aww, this is one sad poem.
Well written though. It has meaning beyond expression, the choice of words are astounding and the feelings it evokes is one none other can compare with. The eyes are the windows to the soul, the eyes show what's in the heart. Falling in love is in the eyes and falling out of love is in the eyes too. Eyes never lie, it shows happiness and sadness but sometimes happiness and sadness plays hide and seek.. (That's what I think). The lips may smile and the eyes may shine in happiness but the sadness that hides in the heart can't be seen by anyone else but felt by the person whose eyes we look into. Really heartfelt poem, well done!