Spontaneous Poems.
FalleN
2011/06/10 17:40
I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. :)
And please no stupid copy-pasting
And please no stupid copy-pasting
_MaD_MaDDy_
2011/06/15 08:16
ok that gud
FalleN
2011/06/16 07:22 Kumz: I dont know...
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
Wow,........ sweetheart You're a poet..
FalleN
2011/06/18 04:23 DeMoNiC_AnGeL: this is copied -taunt1- lol
Okay, this is original...
Baba Baba bullshxt,
I'm a total fool.
My head got a hit,
and I forgot every rule.
GhAyAl
2011/06/24 14:28
Let me try
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Eleto
2011/06/24 15:58
yea.. indeed
mikuz
2011/07/03 11:41
All she did was to tell me lies,
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
klassykitten
2011/07/28 09:01 mikuz: All she did was to tell me lies,
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
i like this so touching
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
klassykitten
2011/07/28 09:04 Kumz: I dont know...
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
nice post ^
EpIcInCoGnItO
2011/07/28 12:28
Its the little things little things that make the world.
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