Spontaneous Poems. by FalleN 2011/06/10 17:40
I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. :)
And please no stupid copy-pasting
I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. :)
And please no stupid copy-pasting
FalleN 2011/06/16 07:22
Wow,........ sweetheart You're a poet..
Quote: Kumz: I dont know...
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
Wow,........ sweetheart You're a poet..
FalleN 2011/06/18 04:23
Okay, this is original...
Baba Baba bullshxt,
I'm a total fool.
My head got a hit,
and I forgot every rule.
Quote: DeMoNiC_AnGeL: this is copied -taunt1- lol
Okay, this is original...
Baba Baba bullshxt,
I'm a total fool.
My head got a hit,
and I forgot every rule.
mikuz 2011/07/03 11:41
All she did was to tell me lies,
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
All she did was to tell me lies,
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
klassykitten 2011/07/28 09:01
Quote: mikuz: All she did was to tell me lies,
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
i like this so touching
Right before my own very eyes,
She threw my undying love away,
But i still think about her all day,
I know she never cared for me,
But Around her arms is where i want to be,
I know i love her so much though,
But guess i've got to let her go,
If she comes back to me - fine,
Otherwise i'll take it that she can never be mine.
klassykitten 2011/07/28 09:04
nice post ^
Quote: Kumz: I dont know...
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!
You love me,
but am not good enough.
You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.
You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.
There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.
I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.
nice post ^
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