Spontaneous Poems. by FalleN 2011/06/10 17:40
I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. :)

And please no stupid copy-pasting


FalleN 2011/06/10 17:58
Snow flakes on the pond

Drifting towards the sea,

Swept up by time

And of course, eternity.



Damn, server gave me a few moments to think, but it WAS spontaneous. /smiley

Muwale 2011/06/10 18:11
Nice try.
_KJOE_ 2011/06/10 18:12
Mine comes sooner /smiley
FalleN 2011/06/10 18:14
Quote: _KJOE_: Mine comes sooner /smiley


So, where is it? Or you just agree. -hahaha-

__ScRraPpY__LoVeR__ 2011/06/10 18:35
DuM !
jazzy12 2011/06/10 18:36
ok i got a lot what or you talking about cuz so what up with you
donprecious 2011/06/10 18:42
Composing mine!
ReAl_PrincEss 2011/06/10 18:49
lost c0nnecti0n try again huhuhu.
FalleN 2011/06/11 04:53
Quote: DeMoNiC_AnGeL: m waiting for u..
waiting for this dark time to pass through..
u r aint urself anymore..
the gaming fever is on ur head for sure..
m tryina get ur attention..
but ur ignorance is really puttin me in tension..
i will wait until u rearrange ur priorties..
n till ur sure of what it is..
hope u wil call me soon..
m lookin up to the midnight moon..



/smiley

kazzy 2011/06/11 13:27
Going to church does not make you a christian, anymore than standing in your garage makes you a car..
FalleN 2011/06/12 06:46
Tears in my eyes,

Jello in the mold.

Am I cool?

Or just plain bold? /smiley

haris 2011/06/12 08:58
jhonny jhonny yes papa,
Eatin sugar?
no papa.
Tellin a lie?
Haha/smiley

FalleN 2011/06/12 09:44
Quote: haris: jhonny jhonny yes papa,
Eatin sugar?
no papa.
Tellin a lie?
Haha/smiley


Crazy good. -hahaha-

sH1vAm 2011/06/12 15:19
Quote: FalleN: I would like to start a thread in which everyone writes instant, unedited poetry. It might be surprising to see what we come up with. /smiley

And please no stupid copy-pasting

I've got one....

I got up early,
My hairs were curly,
I pissed in my pants nearly/smiley,
It happens rarely!

I go to watch TV sincerely,
I was watching Lost regularly,
I liked a fat man called Hurley,
But Jack was acting poorly!

wapgirl 2011/06/12 19:27
If i could have just one wish,i would wish to wake up everyday to the sound of ur breath on my nick,the warmth of you lips on my cheek,the touch of your finger n my skin,and the feel of your heart beating of mine.....Knowing that i could never find the feeling with anyone other than you.
FalleN 2011/06/12 19:54
Quote: sH1vAm:
I've got one....

I got up early,
My hairs were curly,
I pissed in my pants nearly/smiley,
It happens rarely!

I go to watch TV sincerely,
I was watching Lost regularly,
I liked a fat man called Hurley,
But Jack was acting poorly!


Wow, good one, I like lost... I've seen it twice. /smiley

Insenus_AmoR 2011/06/14 21:17
I feel so alone,
Textin on my phone.
I wish she would talk to me,
I think I might go crazy! /smiley

EpIcInCoGnItO 2011/06/14 21:19
Thats sweet and frank /smiley
Quote: AfaQue: I feel so alone,
Textin on my phone.
I wish she would talk to me,
I think I might go crazy! /smiley

Kumz 2011/06/15 04:38
I dont know...
I dont know...!
I DONT KNOW!!!!!!

You love me,
but am not good enough.

You hate me,
but I'm the one you can't live without.

You dump me,
then you want me back.
I'm kinda getting tired of all your crap.

There's another waiting for me.
She'd grab the chance, as soon as I'm free.

I dont mind either...
I dont mind none.
I just need a breather,
a coke and rum.

Kumz 2011/06/15 04:49
When her mood's up,
mine goes high!
When her's is low...
Mine stays high!
When she's PMSing...
My mood's still fine.
When her mood's are swinging,
Mine's sky rocketing.
When she's loving,
I'm just plain high.

She Screams,
I laugh.
She scolds,
I still laugh.
She dumps me for the stupidest reasons,
yet I laugh.
She cries and wants me back...
That's when I fall apart.


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