resphanto V*S Ouch[O1] by bLaCk_LiSt3d 2010/11/04 17:19
okay,the rules:
Verses 2each(1 post=1verse) (2days limit)
Prize,as written in the tourney 100+ to the winner...
judges: open to public
SHOW TIME!!
sHow wHatCa goT...


Shaev7 2010/11/06 19:25
Ok if i go 4d votes,i ain gon get dis...
OUCH:
2much furkin of mama n less dissin his oponent.
Gud punchlines @d 1st vas.
2nd vas,ye came a lil weak there.
Metaphores:i cnt c any ther.
Flows: not hard. N wer nt real.
So watchout.

Resphanto:
yeah,tuk it slow @1st vas wt matured punchlines.
2nd vas he sealed it all wt hard rhymes n punches.
Metaphores: Non. (but i fink i cn find simile or sumptin.)
flows: he got few gud flows @d 2nd vas.
He saw it fr an angle n takled his oponent wel.

1ST JUDGE: GOES TO RESPHANTO.
2nd please?

bLaCk_LiSt3d 2010/11/06 21:48
Quote: Shaev7: Ok if i go 4d votes,i ain gon get dis...
OUCH:
2much furkin of mama n less dissin his oponent.
Gud punchlines @d 1st vas.
2nd vas,ye came a lil weak there.
Metaphores:i cnt c any ther.
Flows: not hard. N wer nt real.
So watchout.

Resphanto:
yeah,tuk it slow @1st vas wt matured punchlines.
2nd vas he sealed it all wt hard rhymes n punches.
Metaphores: Non. (but i fink i cn fid simile or sumptin.)
flows: he got few gud flows @d 2nd vas.
He saw it fr an angle n takled his oponent wel.

1ST JUDGE: GOES TO RESPHANTO.
2nd please?
shaev said it all...

Ouch
diz aint a fucking pornsite dude,so nxt time try to cut down the sexscene n play it gangsta ayt?.,n there' s where u let u guard down..

Resphanto
1st gud one,second cumbck a lil hardr but still need sum work n upgrade urself

Judgin by the punches,flows others like psonalz,multies,nameplays which i cant see any(try 2 use all of diz shxt nxt time)...i vote 4 resphanto,so amma wit shaev
nice job both...

Shaev7 2010/11/07 05:45
FINAL JUDGE:
Since we got 3judges and alrdy goes 2Resphanto. There's no nid 2 wait 4d 3rd one.
The battle goes to Resphanto.
Ouch it was a good 1. U showd a true gee. Neva gv up.


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