I love you 'O' my Mom

saahir OP

14 years ago

#21

Male1974: nice story..really poetic.

these lines are from my true life story.

saahir OP

14 years ago

#22

Both poems are from lines of my true story.

Amywilliam

14 years ago

#23

touchy

cmail

14 years ago

#24

saahir: I love you'O' my MomAs muchI love my GodI remember youAs much I remember my GodI remember once I was hungryI ask you for foodYou gave me a cup of milk with piece of breadI looked at you faceYou read some line on my foreheadYou smiled & said "Eat my child"You pointed your finger towards cooking vesselsBoth were covered with lidsI finished my breakfastShe went outI removed the lidsBoth vessels were EMPTYI cried in a sky breaking voice'O' My God

hearts touching poem yes in this world mom is mom nothing to be comparison no one can't replace her.her place above the god.... this poem above all poem my karma for it

Unic0rn_GirL

14 years ago

#25

saahir: I love you 'O' my mom As much I love my God I remeber When I was in need to pay My school fees You went to money lender You mortgaged your ornaments And I paid my school fees I remember Your eyes were flooded with tears In gratitute to Almighty God I remember the way You saved my carrier l love you 'O' my mom As much I love my God

Heart touching great mom

Sweetcapricorn

14 years ago

#26

nice poem i like it

thanx for sharing.

Rosay

14 years ago

#27

senty

Shush14

14 years ago

#28

awesome poem..

Misty

14 years ago

#29

I think its brilliant especailly 4 payin tribute 2 the most important person in ur life the 1 person who helped gav u life. Words of truth spoken here.