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saahir

Grand father saw
WATER
flowing in RIVER
Father saw it
in WELL
We saw it
in TAP
Our children see it
in BOTTLE
Where will our
Grand Children
SEE IT..!
In CAPSULE..?
If still we neglect
it will be seen only
in
TEARS...
WATER
flowing in RIVER
Father saw it
in WELL
We saw it
in TAP
Our children see it
in BOTTLE
Where will our
Grand Children
SEE IT..!
In CAPSULE..?
If still we neglect
it will be seen only
in

(13:27) Tue, 8 Jan 19
~shiroz~fa

i seeQuote: saahir:
It's a more dry situation

(15:31) Sun, 3 Feb 19
saahir

Quote: ~shiroz~fa: I ws opend capsule but i cant see inside water,,
It's a more dry situation

(11:33) Sun, 3 Feb 19
saahir

Quote: ~shiroz~fa: I ws opend capsule but i cant see inside water,,

(12:35) Thu, 17 Jan 19
~shiroz~fa

I ws opend capsule but i cant see inside water,,

(02:05) Thu, 17 Jan 19
saahir

Quote: KingFISHER: Again they see it in river
Yes, with flood of tears those who are suffering with broken heart.
(16:35) Mon, 14 Jan 19
KingFISHER

Again they see it in river
(14:03) Mon, 14 Jan 19
ABHIRAJ

Hey brother..dont worry water wont vanish.since my childhood am listening to such thing,that water will end up one day..l dont think so
(09:38) Sun, 13 Jan 19
priti4

ya ya
(22:03) Sat, 12 Jan 19
Maryam

Only in Tears.. Of Joy
(15:37) Sat, 12 Jan 19
saahir

Brother, only one sentence or comment was enough, either in favour or dislikes. Why did you flooded my topic? All beauty of topic is smashed. Next thing it is not created by me but is a copied stuff.
(07:52) Sat, 12 Jan 19
outlaw

They will stop me from posting saahir but i loved your poem...i understood it
(19:57) Fri, 11 Jan 19
outlaw

Ok im crazy im gone lol
(19:40) Fri, 11 Jan 19
outlaw

Let e put it this nice way..those tears NEED to fall right back into the water...and we need to go thru the entire circle again....and again
....and again and again...we need practice
....and again and again...we need practice
(19:38) Fri, 11 Jan 19
outlaw

Not that i hate your poem. This is a very beautiful poem. Thanks for this.
(19:32) Fri, 11 Jan 19
outlaw

Morality must dwindle for society to prosper, my dear saahir.
(19:31) Fri, 11 Jan 19
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