Give Me Some Time by saahir 2016/09/21 06:49
Let me know your wishes
So that I may fulfill
The promisses I made
I promise not to leave you alone
When tears flowing from your eyes
And will make you laugh
though suffering my
heart with pain
Wait a little while..

Let me free my nations
Those who don't have roof
over their heads
Having no education
suffering from hunger
even lacks of all basic needs..

Then I'll turn to you
And fulfill all your wishes
Please wait my sweet .heart.
Give Me Some Time...!!!






_SonIcGirL_ 2016/09/21 06:54
Good /smiley
Kalpana 2016/09/21 07:22
Ditto sonic/smiley
ABHIRAJ 2016/09/21 07:57
Tuff task.not so easy.nyc words..
@RADHIKA @ 2016/09/21 08:01
nice line
ABHIRAJ 2016/09/21 14:00
Quote: RINCESS SUNl">PRINCESS SUNl: Wht to mean tuff task.ls lt tht easy to break a promise

its rather easy to break ur head/smiley
-nana-
ArjunPratap 2016/09/21 14:30
nice one
Kayli 2016/09/21 18:55
Excelent topic
KingFISHER 2016/09/24 02:48
meaningful lines. Superb!
THE_SPEAR_KING 2016/10/03 03:57
Patriotism comes first. .run. Nice words with great sense
SONIC 2016/10/05 10:57
I loved it!
jaQui 2017/11/09 18:52
Beautiful .flower1.
jaQui 2017/11/09 23:30
Karma!!! .rose.
i_am_what_i_am 2017/12/28 22:18
Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.
saahir 2018/01/02 05:17
Quote: i_am_what_i_am: Time is like a river. The flow that passed will never pass again.

But the next wave could be a chance to avail.
i_am_what_i_am 2018/01/02 06:37
Quote: saahir:
But the next wave could be a chance to avail.

Rivers dont have waves, only ripples
saahir 2018/01/02 10:17
Quote: i_am_what_i_am:
Rivers dont have waves, only ripples

tnx 4 info .rose.
i_am_what_i_am 2018/01/02 10:46
Quote: saahir:
tnx 4 info .rose.


My pleasure .flowers.
Maryam 2018/05/27 15:51
Nice post Saahir but
For how long can ur sweet /smiley wait .lol.
saahir 2018/05/27 17:30
Quote: Maryam: Nice post Saahir but
For how long can ur sweet /smiley wait .lol.

As long the problems could solved.
Maryam 2018/05/27 20:57
Quote: saahir:
As long the problems could solved.

Then I guess forever cuz these prblms
Can't be solved cmpltly
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