Good night my love!
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RiC_L
2014/08/18 19:54
As I am saying good night at the end of the day, And you are not here, but many miles away, My heart is so empty and so lonely inside, As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide. I close my eyes and try to go to sleep, But with the sadness inside I begin to weep. Suddenly I remember what you once said to me, Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be. When distance tends to keep us apart, Remember I still hold you near in my heart. When the night together, can't be ours, Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars. Remembering those words, I begin to smile, And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles. I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged, But you are not there, no hug to exchange. I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart, No longer wanting to be kept apart. Suddenly in the distance, a shadow appears, A tear rolls down my face and the image is clear.
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Boet
2014/08/18 20:08
A wonderful compesition, but it feels so composed... I can't help wondering, does it come from the heart, or are we just relaying something?
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ladyme
2014/08/18 22:24
Beautiful beautiful !! ; but like Toni Braxton said "it's just another sad love song raking my brain like crazy" aaaww
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yvee_@
2014/08/19 03:40
Beautifully composed.
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-LILY-
2014/08/19 10:48
beautiful.
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brightsquare
2014/08/19 16:40
Nice poem
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saahir
2014/08/20 05:11
Well versed smiley
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David.adams
2016/08/17 12:19
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