Good night my love! by RiC_L 2014/08/18 19:54
As I am saying good night at the end of the day,
And you are not here, but many miles away,
My heart is so empty and so lonely inside,
As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide.

I close my eyes and try to go to sleep,
But with the sadness inside I begin to weep.
Suddenly I remember what you once said to me,
Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be.

When distance tends to keep us apart,
Remember I still hold you near in my heart.
When the night together, can't be ours,
Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars.

Remembering those words, I begin to smile,
And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles.
I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged,
But you are not there, no hug to exchange.

I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart,
No longer wanting to be kept apart.
Suddenly in the distance, a shadow appears,
A tear rolls down my face and the image is clear.
Boet 2014/08/18 20:08
A wonderful compesition, but it feels so composed... I can't help wondering, does it come from the heart, or are we just relaying something?
ladyme 2014/08/18 22:24
Beautiful beautiful !! ; but like Toni Braxton said "it's just another sad love song raking my brain like crazy" aaaww
yvee_@ 2014/08/19 03:40
Beautifully composed.
-LILY- 2014/08/19 10:48
beautiful.
brightsquare 2014/08/19 16:40
Nice poem
saahir 2014/08/20 05:11
Well versed /smiley
David.adams 2016/08/17 12:19
Gud
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