Broken HeArT
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saahir
2014/05/11 18:56
It was half moon night..
At the sea-shore..
A girl alone..
Roaming her fingers..
On the sandy ground..
Sketching some lines..
Throwing a glance..
Looking at them..
Changing her angles..

I was at a distance..
Little far..
Suddenly I heard a cry..
Why you broke my heart..?
Where I was wrong..?
Why did you go away..?
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jaQui
2014/05/11 19:14
Nice n sad /smiley
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jaQui
2014/05/11 19:16
Very good poem of ur own
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Kayli
2014/05/11 19:35
So sado /smiley
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Georginia
2014/05/12 00:44
Dats sad bro../smiley
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ladyme
2014/05/12 06:22
Another break-up
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-LILY-
2014/05/12 06:43
wow its so touching poem my sweet bhai...
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Anuradha786
2014/05/12 08:06
saahir: It was half moon night..
At the sea-shore..
A girl alone..
Roaming her fingers..
On the sandy ground..
Sketching some lines..
Throwing a glance..
Looking at them..
Changing her angles..

I was at a distance..
Little far..
Suddenly I heard a cry..
Why you broke my heart..?
Where I was wrong..?
Why did you go away..?
Heart-touching lines -catcry- truly emotional..dear..
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_ShAnE_StArK_
2016/01/07 04:24
Sad one bro...
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