Continue the poem...
Alesis 2013/12/29 22:16
Each one posts a verse to create a poem...I'll start...

The heartless man gaze at the black sea(continue)

jaQui 2013/12/30 01:10
Walking on the beach,,,
Alesis 2013/12/30 09:08
With thoughs that put his heart under brutal siege
Rebellion 2013/12/31 08:17
Here comes the breeze..
Alesis 2014/01/03 21:31
wich brings the ships full of enemies

Alesis 2014/01/09 10:38
but I`m mearely a memory

Rebellion 2014/01/09 17:03
and comes again the January
TinHeart 2014/01/10 19:26
with its bitter cold

Rebellion 2014/01/10 20:27
Now the light isn't necessary..
TinHeart 2014/01/14 08:08
when darkness brings pain an misery
TinHeart 2014/01/23 12:55
with eyes wide shut he screams in dispare
Necessary_Evil 2014/01/23 12:59
'cause Dearh follows him and he is aware
Necessary_Evil 2014/01/23 12:59
spelling mistake/smileyeath*
TinHeart 2014/01/24 07:03
That his enemies caught him in a snare
Georginia 2014/01/25 18:19
Give death a bit of life again to share
TinHeart 2014/01/25 22:01
Feels like he belongs elswhere...
Georginia 2014/01/26 05:59
Follow him if u r a dare
TinHeart 2014/01/26 06:43
To the place that's never there...
Georginia 2014/01/26 12:20
No resting place for him to share
TinHeart 2014/01/26 18:32
he takes his sword,
no time to spare...
Georginia 2014/01/26 18:38
To take away the life of a common man
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