A Refused Proposal by Fremder_Aryan 2012/12/11 04:36
last time when I'd met my
friend Mr. Vidyut, I
promised him that I would
be back to home empty
handed.
since many a days I had
been seeking a story to
write but unfortunately
( perhaps for futures
fortune) I couldn't help
myself write any. And
these is the first story that
made me narrate this
evening in perforce while I
was looking the rain out
the window. with no late ,
I must start from the
starting.
last week, when I came
online on facebook, I
received a friend request
by a strange girl. A girl
whose name I can't share
with you. I added her in
my friendlist and soon we
started chatting online and
offline. Soon we became
intimate friends. Friends
who shared their loneliness
with each other especially
when both, she and I felt
sleepless at midnight. At
first approach, I'm always a
disgusting man with a
cruel intentions. So was I to
her. I treated her like a
hungry man of erotic talks.I
don't know how but soon I
began to feel a pinch in my
heart. By the time I had no
idea what it was. Let me
confess one thing She was
no longer a stranger for
me. Later I came to know
she was my friend's
girlfriend's friend. If we
simply learn it, we find she
was girl's side and I was
boy's.
our chit-chat went on and
nearly taking a direction.
Once I asked her for her
mobile no. and she quietly
gave me. I still am
surprised how she believed
me blindly ( I think its
metaphor, actually we're
friends, in fact close ones,
so she gave me her no.).
afterwards, I must have
talked her many a times.
talked about what we
doing right then, where we
belonged, how we doing,
which kind of persons we
hate and love,,
anything.....ev erything but
sexual affairs. actually I
was being little formal
now. When those couples I
mean her friend as well as
mine got to know
everything, then planned
to each other. They
planned to see each-other
in park. Here the 'each-
other' means those couples
who were encouraging us
two to make a love story. A
love story meant to be-
they never saw each other,
they grew friends via
facebook, and now they
standing together, they are
in love now. Earlier the plot
was secret for me ( I don't
know whether my girl was
acknowledged to it or not.
Today, in evening, at 5:30,
when I joined my friend
aditya entering the park, I
saw two girls. One was
aditya's gf and other one
was mine-to-be. When four
of us gathered, exchanging
hi and good evening.
Aditya's girlfriend
reminded me how I talked
to her friend on facebook
and that when I had a
fortune to talk her face to
face right then, I should
avail it. They left us two
sitting on a bench that was
placed under a luxuriant
tree.Definitely We're
feeling uncomfortable, In
fact I was at my worst. I
kept a sufficient space
between us. Both of us
were sitting at the
opposite edges. I stared
conversation with a simple
'SOOOOOO'. she answered
me with the same word.
And gradually our talk
found a direction. Initially
we talked about what we
had already done on
facebook, but that crucial
find we did so just to find
something to do. We
talked about career, our
family background, our
dreams, our vices and
virtues, our
disappointment, our past,
our grieves, our past-love
(s) and last thing that kept
persisting all the time was
talk of our friends who
were kissing each other in
some bush. I guess She was
talkative but I loved her
truthfulness. I was quite
impressed. All of sudden I
interrupted her saying one
thing- " listen, if you don't
mind, let me tell you why I
came here." and the next
split of second I said "I can
cry million tears and walk
million miles just to be
with you. I love you. Will
you marry me if you
become a singer and I
become a govt. employee
in future. your yes or no?"
P.T.O
last time when I'd met my
friend Mr. Vidyut, I
promised him that I would
be back to home empty
handed.
since many a days I had
been seeking a story to
write but unfortunately
( perhaps for futures
fortune) I couldn't help
myself write any. And
these is the first story that
made me narrate this
evening in perforce while I
was looking the rain out
the window. with no late ,
I must start from the
starting.
last week, when I came
online on facebook, I
received a friend request
by a strange girl. A girl
whose name I can't share
with you. I added her in
my friendlist and soon we
started chatting online and
offline. Soon we became
intimate friends. Friends
who shared their loneliness
with each other especially
when both, she and I felt
sleepless at midnight. At
first approach, I'm always a
disgusting man with a
cruel intentions. So was I to
her. I treated her like a
hungry man of erotic talks.I
don't know how but soon I
began to feel a pinch in my
heart. By the time I had no
idea what it was. Let me
confess one thing She was
no longer a stranger for
me. Later I came to know
she was my friend's
girlfriend's friend. If we
simply learn it, we find she
was girl's side and I was
boy's.
our chit-chat went on and
nearly taking a direction.
Once I asked her for her
mobile no. and she quietly
gave me. I still am
surprised how she believed
me blindly ( I think its
metaphor, actually we're
friends, in fact close ones,
so she gave me her no.).
afterwards, I must have
talked her many a times.
talked about what we
doing right then, where we
belonged, how we doing,
which kind of persons we
hate and love,,
anything.....ev erything but
sexual affairs. actually I
was being little formal
now. When those couples I
mean her friend as well as
mine got to know
everything, then planned
to each other. They
planned to see each-other
in park. Here the 'each-
other' means those couples
who were encouraging us
two to make a love story. A
love story meant to be-
they never saw each other,
they grew friends via
facebook, and now they
standing together, they are
in love now. Earlier the plot
was secret for me ( I don't
know whether my girl was
acknowledged to it or not.
Today, in evening, at 5:30,
when I joined my friend
aditya entering the park, I
saw two girls. One was
aditya's gf and other one
was mine-to-be. When four
of us gathered, exchanging
hi and good evening.
Aditya's girlfriend
reminded me how I talked
to her friend on facebook
and that when I had a
fortune to talk her face to
face right then, I should
avail it. They left us two
sitting on a bench that was
placed under a luxuriant
tree.Definitely We're
feeling uncomfortable, In
fact I was at my worst. I
kept a sufficient space
between us. Both of us
were sitting at the
opposite edges. I stared
conversation with a simple
'SOOOOOO'. she answered
me with the same word.
And gradually our talk
found a direction. Initially
we talked about what we
had already done on
facebook, but that crucial
find we did so just to find
something to do. We
talked about career, our
family background, our
dreams, our vices and
virtues, our
disappointment, our past,
our grieves, our past-love
(s) and last thing that kept
persisting all the time was
talk of our friends who
were kissing each other in
some bush. I guess She was
talkative but I loved her
truthfulness. I was quite
impressed. All of sudden I
interrupted her saying one
thing- " listen, if you don't
mind, let me tell you why I
came here." and the next
split of second I said "I can
cry million tears and walk
million miles just to be
with you. I love you. Will
you marry me if you
become a singer and I
become a govt. employee
in future. your yes or no?"
P.T.O
Fremder_Aryan 2012/12/11 04:41
she wanted to be a singer
she had told me before half
an hour and I added that in
my proposal. A vendor
came to us and asked us if
we wanted some
beverages. We nodded no.
then, she said to me "no,
sorry anurag, but no". For a
moment, even my heart
stopped beating let alone
my movements.
Afterwards she tried to
manage the condition. She
said," Anurag, you love me
thats fine but..... I no longer
believe in boys. Boys love a
girl for true till she loves
him."
I remarked,"then, miss
(........) ! please promise me
you won't love me for the
rest of your life". She was
silent. For 2 minutes I was
sitting there holding my
hands against each other,
adjusting my spects over
and over and trying to
resist my tears. Then, I
said," I wish I could have
some water. I"m dying for
water at this crucial
moment."
We exchanged smiles. I
stopped and said to
her,"WELLLL, IF YOU DON'T
HAVE PROBLEM, COULD YOU
SIT ALONE FOR FIVE
MINUTES? SHE AND ADITYA
WILL BE COMING BACK.
PLEASURE TO MEET YOU
MISS(.......... .), FOR THE LAST
TIME( it was first too).
BABYE. HAVE A NICE NIGHT."
I silently came out of the
park, trying to wipe my
tears with my shivering
hands. I caught a bus, for
back to home.
she wanted to be a singer
she had told me before half
an hour and I added that in
my proposal. A vendor
came to us and asked us if
we wanted some
beverages. We nodded no.
then, she said to me "no,
sorry anurag, but no". For a
moment, even my heart
stopped beating let alone
my movements.
Afterwards she tried to
manage the condition. She
said," Anurag, you love me
thats fine but..... I no longer
believe in boys. Boys love a
girl for true till she loves
him."
I remarked,"then, miss
(........) ! please promise me
you won't love me for the
rest of your life". She was
silent. For 2 minutes I was
sitting there holding my
hands against each other,
adjusting my spects over
and over and trying to
resist my tears. Then, I
said," I wish I could have
some water. I"m dying for
water at this crucial
moment."
We exchanged smiles. I
stopped and said to
her,"WELLLL, IF YOU DON'T
HAVE PROBLEM, COULD YOU
SIT ALONE FOR FIVE
MINUTES? SHE AND ADITYA
WILL BE COMING BACK.
PLEASURE TO MEET YOU
MISS(.......... .), FOR THE LAST
TIME( it was first too).
BABYE. HAVE A NICE NIGHT."
I silently came out of the
park, trying to wipe my
tears with my shivering
hands. I caught a bus, for
back to home.
adamjr 2012/12/11 09:16
Well, I wouldn't sweat it too much. There's other fish in the sea. In my own opinion, I think you were rushing into marriage and you led your heart get the best of yourself with the love that you had for her. Maybe she would stop and think about how much you loved her and how much you would never stop loving her. Cause in my own opinion that you were the man in her life even though you did met on facebook, talked on the phone and met face to face. That's a good thing. I don't know if your still taking to her or just being friends with her. But I would advise you to follow your heart and let God guyed you into your heart. Maybe you didn't get the woman in your life. But just think you may not have that woman in your life, but you still have your very own heart. And again, there's other fish in the sea. I hope that you get the woman in your life and let God guyed you in His life forever in His lasting love.
Well, I wouldn't sweat it too much. There's other fish in the sea. In my own opinion, I think you were rushing into marriage and you led your heart get the best of yourself with the love that you had for her. Maybe she would stop and think about how much you loved her and how much you would never stop loving her. Cause in my own opinion that you were the man in her life even though you did met on facebook, talked on the phone and met face to face. That's a good thing. I don't know if your still taking to her or just being friends with her. But I would advise you to follow your heart and let God guyed you into your heart. Maybe you didn't get the woman in your life. But just think you may not have that woman in your life, but you still have your very own heart. And again, there's other fish in the sea. I hope that you get the woman in your life and let God guyed you in His life forever in His lasting love.
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