A dream!
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_Sid_
2012/11/26 10:25
Wake up,
Im still awake!

Watching u flutter ur eyes,seeing an imaginary realm!

Reading ur thoughts,as u feel ur dream!

Its nothing but a dreary path,which u think will last!

The fruitless schemes of ur future,weighing on the past!

U r ur dream's hero,twisting,turning and dodging!

U got no idea that someone,through n through,is watching!

Pray,whine,rush,let ur soul scatter!

But in the end,it duznt even matter!

Wake up,
U will realise!

That all ur life is just a dream,beautiful,bittersweet and wild!

Wake up,
relax!

After all,u r just a child!:-)


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-Marizelle-
2012/11/26 10:54
Excellent poem friend
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saahir
2012/11/26 12:13
Awakening!
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Meer@.gupta
2012/11/26 12:23
Nice poem frd
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Kumz
2012/11/26 13:01
Wow!! -clap-
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EllaiZa
2012/11/26 13:55
absolutely amazing.! somewhere in the lines it brings the message of realization and to live every moment of life to the fullest..
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Fantasy
2012/11/26 16:27
Very good poem ....
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trakkerterrorist
2012/11/26 17:15
great stup .pup.
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Hikaru
2012/11/26 18:57
Wow impressive!-up-i like it
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Marlou
2012/11/27 09:02
Great!-clap- enjoy every m0ment of your life. Just dance with the music.-smile-
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-linda-
2012/12/19 03:09
keep it up. nice
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