Don't cry
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saahir
2012/11/23 07:46
If you are filled,
with sorrow,
and
distressful,
lost every hope,
find no help,
any where..

Don't cry,
coz you will lose,
courage...

Fight against
your failures..

Gather,
energy,
and
resourcess,
peep in your past,
check the mistakes,
you made before,
correct them,
go ahead,
try again,
work hard,
and have patience,

Don't cry,
success is ahead..
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aprillia
2012/11/23 09:20
with cry,that will help me to throw all my bad feelings.
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-Marizelle-
2012/11/23 09:41
Nice one./smiley
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_rOcK_
2012/11/23 12:22
truely said.../smiley
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Princess_Jasmine
2012/11/23 13:11
true.
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mk_alyana
2012/11/23 14:22
I nvr be ashamed of my tears, i am in rain upon blinding dust of earth,over laying my hard heart, i wl feel better after i cried.more sorry,more aware of my own ingratitude. . . So just let all ths tears of ctying can be last til it made me like a stone that nobody can make me cry again, . . . anymore . . . ''"
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shilpa
2012/11/23 14:41
nice.../smiley
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saahir
2012/11/23 15:06
shilpa: nice.../smiley

wipe your tears,
adorne your lips,
with a slight smile,
forget,
what is passed,
keep smiling,
and feel,
change,
in
your life..
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mk_alyana
2012/11/23 15:17
saahir:
wipe your tears,
adorne your lips,
with a slight smile,
forget,
what is passed,
keep smiling,
and feel,
change,
in
your life..
. . . . . After ctying nd realizing d mistakes that i've done surely everything wl change,, n i never be like d same as i am nw.. . Tears wl nver be flow in my eyes again
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Fantasy
2012/11/23 16:34
Yeah, nice
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Meer@.gupta
2012/11/23 17:43
princess_nisha: nice 0ne n true bhai.karma fr0m me.
1 more from me.
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Fairyflexy
2012/11/23 17:59
M human n sometims cry when m rily hurt but never lose hope . Nice topic Saahir
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trakkerterrorist
2012/11/23 20:11
gifts arent for cry.
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saahir
2012/11/23 20:38
alone: . . . . . After crying nd realizing d mistakes that i've done surely everything wl change,, n i never be like d same as i am nw.. . Tears wl nver be flow in my eyes again

eyes are like,
lakes of tear,
it flow,
wen hurt,
can't bear,
distresses,
so be contended,
for to bear,
hard time
wid patience,
so pearls of
tears
cud be preserved..
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samii
2012/11/23 22:54
Very nice sahir bro
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Marlou
2012/11/24 01:32
True words of encouragement, however, crying is one way to release tensi0n and it d0esnt mean that we r weak when we cry./smiley
It is only worst when u laugh when u r hurt coz it means that s0mething wr0ng happened to u./smiley
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skyliner
2012/11/24 02:29
such very nice poem..it gives courage,this is what exactly what am doing bcoz i nkow after the rain there will be sunshine..God has prepared a beter one..
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K_shaka
2012/11/24 04:21
encouraging..
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Fantasy
2012/11/25 16:16
alone: . . . . . After ctying nd realizing d mistakes that i've done surely everything wl change,, n i never be like d same as i am nw.. . Tears wl nver be flow in my eyes again
/smiley
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jamella16
2012/11/25 17:46
tears cn lessen up the burden or pain we felt so y hide ur tears? /smiley
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--BooM-ShAnKaR--
2012/11/28 11:47
nYc OnE /smiley
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