Promise
27 replies
saahir
Sep 26, 2012 13:01
Moon was disapeared some where far of the ocean it was a dark night and I was waiting I looked a glance in the sky stars were teasing me frogs some where in dark laughing at my folly but I was confident I laid down on sand bed I dint remember when slumber covered me up I opened my eyes when some rays of rising sun fell on me It was her last promise she failed to fulfil it
jaQui
Sep 26, 2012 13:08
? Very nice
jamella16
Sep 26, 2012 14:36
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
-Marizelle-
Sep 26, 2012 14:43
Nice poem saahir
aprillia
Sep 26, 2012 15:16
nice poem.
The_Torpid
Sep 26, 2012 15:18
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
Manal
Sep 26, 2012 16:48
nice postsmiley
Terry
Sep 26, 2012 17:06
nice btw its sad smiley
Trax
Sep 27, 2012 09:12
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Hareesh
Sep 28, 2012 04:48
Beautiful poem nice well topic
mary
Oct 26, 2012 19:03
nice this one..good!
trakkerterrorist
Oct 26, 2012 19:06
this words take me thinking
MAHESH_K
Oct 27, 2012 18:35
Nice 1 bro smiley
Meer@.gupta
Oct 27, 2012 18:41
princess_nisha: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poem
Appe
Oct 27, 2012 18:46
Oh that's really nice
Sandal
Oct 27, 2012 18:51
Meer@.gupta: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. smiley
nandupk61
Oct 28, 2012 01:05
Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
_Ritesh rockx_
Oct 28, 2012 01:52
Gud
Thapasya
Oct 28, 2012 03:20
nice keep it up
suny33
Oct 28, 2012 03:27
Hjmgj
Fantasy
Oct 28, 2012 18:26
nice poem
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