Promise
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saahir
2012/09/26 13:01
Moon was disapeared some where far of the ocean it was a dark night and I was waiting I looked a glance in the sky stars were teasing me frogs some where in dark laughing at my folly but I was confident I laid down on sand bed I dint remember when slumber covered me up I opened my eyes when some rays of rising sun fell on me It was her last promise she failed to fulfil it
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jaQui
2012/09/26 13:08
? Very nice
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jamella16
2012/09/26 14:36
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
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-Marizelle-
2012/09/26 14:43
Nice poem saahir
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aprillia
2012/09/26 15:16
nice poem.
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The_Torpid
2012/09/26 15:18
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
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Manal
2012/09/26 16:48
nice postsmiley
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Terry
2012/09/26 17:06
nice btw its sad smiley
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Trax
2012/09/27 09:12
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
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Hareesh
2012/09/28 04:48
Beautiful poem nice well topic
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mary
2012/10/26 19:03
nice this one..good!
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trakkerterrorist
2012/10/26 19:06
this words take me thinking
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MAHESH_K
2012/10/27 18:35
Nice 1 bro smiley
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Meer@.gupta
2012/10/27 18:41
princess_nisha: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poem
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Appe
2012/10/27 18:46
Oh that's really nice
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Sandal
2012/10/27 18:51
Meer@.gupta: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. smiley
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nandupk61
2012/10/28 01:05
Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
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_Ritesh rockx_
2012/10/28 01:52
Gud
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Thapasya
2012/10/28 03:20
nice keep it up
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suny33
2012/10/28 03:27
Hjmgj
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Fantasy
2012/10/28 18:26
nice poem
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