Promise by saahir 2012/09/26 13:01
Moon was disapeared
some where far of the ocean

it was a dark night
and I was waiting

I looked a glance in the sky
stars were teasing me

frogs some where in dark
laughing at my folly

but I was confident
I laid down on sand bed

I dint remember
when slumber covered me up

I opened my eyes when
some rays of rising sun fell on me

It was her last promise
she failed to fulfil it


Trax 2012/09/27 09:12
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Hareesh 2012/09/28 04:48
Beautiful poem
nice
well topic

jaQui 2012/09/26 13:08
? Very nice

jamella16 2012/09/26 14:36
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
-Marizelle- 2012/09/26 14:43
Nice poem saahir
aprillia 2012/09/26 15:16
nice poem.
The_Torpid 2012/09/26 15:18
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
Manal 2012/09/26 16:48
nice post/smiley
Terry 2012/09/26 17:06
nice btw its sad /smiley
mary 2012/10/26 19:03
nice this one..good!
trakkerterrorist 2012/10/26 19:06
this words take me thinking
MAHESH_K 2012/10/27 18:35
Nice 1 bro /smiley
Meer@.gupta 2012/10/27 18:41
Quote: princess_nisha: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poem

Appe 2012/10/27 18:46
Oh that's really nice
Sandal 2012/10/27 18:51
Quote: Meer@.gupta: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. -hahaha-

nandupk61 2012/10/28 01:05

Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks

_Ritesh rockx_ 2012/10/28 01:52
Gud
Thapasya 2012/10/28 03:20
nice keep it up
suny33 2012/10/28 03:27
Hjmgj
Fantasy 2012/10/28 18:26
nice poem

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