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saahir
2012/09/26 13:01
Moon was disapeared
some where far of the ocean
it was a dark night
and I was waiting
I looked a glance in the sky
stars were teasing me
frogs some where in dark
laughing at my folly
but I was confident
I laid down on sand bed
I dint remember
when slumber covered me up
I opened my eyes when
some rays of rising sun fell on me
It was her last promise
she failed to fulfil it
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jaQui
2012/09/26 13:08
? Very nice
jamella16
2012/09/26 14:36
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
-Marizelle-
2012/09/26 14:43
Nice poem saahir
aprillia
2012/09/26 15:16
nice poem.
The_Torpid
2012/09/26 15:18
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
Manal
2012/09/26 16:48
nice post
Terry
2012/09/26 17:06
nice btw its sad
Trax
2012/09/27 09:12
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Hareesh
2012/09/28 04:48
Beautiful poem
nice
well topic
mary
2012/10/26 19:03
nice this one..good!
trakkerterrorist
2012/10/26 19:06
this words take me thinking
MAHESH_K
2012/10/27 18:35
Nice 1 bro
Meer@.gupta
2012/10/27 18:41
princess_nisha
: nice 0ne bhai.karma 4 poem
karma 4 poem
Appe
2012/10/27 18:46
Oh that's really nice
Sandal
2012/10/27 18:51
Meer@.gupta
: karma 4 poem
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. -hahaha-
nandupk61
2012/10/28 01:05
Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
_Ritesh rockx_
2012/10/28 01:52
Gud
Thapasya
2012/10/28 03:20
nice keep it up
suny33
2012/10/28 03:27
Hjmgj
Fantasy
2012/10/28 18:26
nice poem
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