Promise by
saahir 2012/09/26 13:01
Moon was disapeared
some where far of the ocean
it was a dark night
and I was waiting
I looked a glance in the sky
stars were teasing me
frogs some where in dark
laughing at my folly
but I was confident
I laid down on sand bed
I dint remember
when slumber covered me up
I opened my eyes when
some rays of rising sun fell on me
It was her last promise
she failed to fulfil it
Trax 2012/09/27 09:12
Nice ...1 karma 4 u
Hareesh 2012/09/28 04:48
Beautiful poem
nice
well topic
jaQui 2012/09/26 13:08
? Very nice
jamella16 2012/09/26 14:36
very nice poem bt it's sad...unfulfilld promise
The_Torpid 2012/09/26 15:18
Nice one bro karma 4 u.
Manal 2012/09/26 16:48
nice post
Terry 2012/09/26 17:06
nice btw its sad
mary 2012/10/26 19:03
nice this one..good!
Appe 2012/10/27 18:46
Oh that's really nice
Sandal 2012/10/27 18:51
its so nice and i think its a criminal mind. But am a criminal lowyer. -hahaha-
nandupk61 2012/10/28 01:05
Touchy,vesy emotional,nd realistics,thanks
Thapasya 2012/10/28 03:20
nice keep it up
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