"PAIN"
saahir 2012/09/22 18:39
Love is pain now in my life,
days I remember,
I passed with you,

Since my childhood,
as I remember,
always we use to play together,

As I remember,
I act husband,
and you as my wife,

As the days passed,
distances came in between,
you got engaged with some one,

I cried for you,
but my cry was lost,
non heard it, and you got married,

I remained alone,
with your memories,
and with my pain


aprillia 2012/09/22 22:36
beautiful sad poem./smiley
jaQui 2012/09/23 00:27
!Awsome poem

Trax 2012/09/23 02:00
Nice sad poem /smiley
KingFISHER 2012/09/23 03:03
stand up frnd and start to rebuild ur life again.
THE_SPEAR_KING 2012/09/23 07:03
pain /smiley
_Ritesh rockx_ 2012/09/23 15:55
Painful story
jamella16 2012/09/23 16:15
happiness is tempo and so is pain. Just pick up urself and stand up. Everything will be alright /smiley
saahir 2012/09/23 17:34
Hold my hand,
come close to me,

I am waiting,
some one will come,

I don't know,
from where and when,

she will enter in my life,
and will fill the vacuum,

making place in my heart,
and will change my empty life

saahir 2012/09/23 17:34
Hold my hand,
come close to me,

I am waiting,
some one will come,

I don't know,
from where and when,

she will enter in my life,
and will fill the vacuum,

making place in my heart,
and will change my empty life

GITA_RS 2012/09/23 17:54
Nice but very sad..-girlweep-
Fantasy 2012/09/24 15:41
Heart touching...
Hareesh 2012/09/28 05:07
Yes frnd u r ryt
lv is life
gud topic

Hareesh 2012/09/29 16:04
Thanks a lot
saahir 2012/10/10 13:19
The pain with I suffer
Is not a pain of distances
You are still close to me
Yes, very close in my heart,

I feel your existance
When I close my eyes
I feel your smooth touches
When I smell your gifts

I'm alive with your memories
I'm alive with the ways we walked
I'm alive with your gifts
I'm alive with my heart beats

Which always sings your song
Which takes your name
But when I open my eyes
I see me, I'm "ALONE"..

-Marizelle- 2012/10/10 13:23
So beautiful poem
Manal 2012/10/10 13:25
wonderful/smiley
KingFISHER 2012/10/10 13:28
saahir: The pain with I suffer
Is not a pain of distances
You are still close to me
Yes, very close in my heart,

I feel your existance
When I close my eyes
I feel your smooth touches
When I smell your gifts

I'm alive with your memories
I'm alive with the ways we walked
I'm alive with your gifts
I'm alive with my heart beats

Which always sings your song
Which takes your name
But when I open my eyes
I see me, I'm "ALONE"..


just outstanding written!

aprillia 2012/10/10 14:03
wow really beautiful bro.
-loveit-
karma for u./smiley

jamella16 2012/10/10 15:05
very nice,best!/smiley U'l nevr be alone,u knw that../smiley
Sandal 2012/10/10 19:46
Not only 4 a poem /smiley
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