Old Friend Is The Gold Friend
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Sumita
2012/04/06 12:29
Theres hearts filled with
laughter
and eyes moved to tears
with memories so vivid
transcending the years
the words of
compassion
and actions so kind
the sun smiles down,
when
old friends come to
mind
Ive counted my
blessings
and shuffled my dreams
and sang to the music
of deep forest streams
searching for places
the light always shined
like deep in my soul,
when
old friends come to
mind
I count you among
mind
I count you among
all the guides on the
path
who loved me and
taught me
to dream and to laugh
when I reach my heaven
I know that Ill find
this heaven was built
by old friends, I call
mine............................................................old friend is gold friend
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KingFISHER
2012/04/06 17:50
Frndz are never been old.
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saahir
2012/04/07 13:21
I can't copmpare my friendship with gold
Frenz never get old
As gold getz old
If I compare my frenz with gold
I feel myself guilty of conscious
I love not my frenz
As I Love gold
But I love my frenz
As I love myself
I love you
I love you
I love you
My frenz
As I love myself
So remain young alwez
And never become old
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jaQui
2012/04/07 13:31
Nice ! .flower1.
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Sweetcapricorn
2012/04/07 14:31
saahir: I can't copmpare my friendship with gold
Frenz never get old
As gold getz old
If I compare my frenz with gold
I feel myself guilty of conscious
I love not my frenz
As I Love gold
But I love my frenz
As I love myself
I love you
I love you
I love you
My frenz
As I love myself
So remain young alwez
And never become old
-up- nice k33p it up
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Unic0rn_GirL
2012/04/07 15:05
nyc sweet poems *roses*
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Manal
2012/04/07 15:16
well it depends,some of my friends are differents,
i have have diamond friend which is my best,
i have gold friend which is sweet,
i have silver friend which is naughty,
i have bronze friend which is 50/50 and i have copper friends which is totally useless
but still they are my friends and even the time gets old,for me they are young,and priceless/smiley
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SoftwareboY
2012/04/07 15:20
Awesome,nice lines. Poems re always hard 4 me...but this sounds really beautiful...simple and great...and a simple guy like me really appreciate this work...(tnx)
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cmail
2012/04/07 15:24
saahir: I can't copmpare my friendship with goldFrenz never get oldAs gold getz oldIf I compare my frenz with goldI feel myself guilty of consciousI love not my frenzAs I Love goldBut I love my frenzAs I love myselfI love youI love youI love youMy frenzAs I love myselfSo remain young alwezAnd never become old

wow too nice my karama for this
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cmail
2012/04/07 15:28
mnal: well it depends,some of my friends are differents,i have have diamond friend which is my best,i have gold friend which is sweet,i have silver friend which is naughty,i have bronze friend which is 50/50 and i have copper friends which is totally useless but still they are my friends and even the time gets old,for me they are young,and priceless/smiley

mnal beyond the diamond some more mean can't compare hahaha friendship never be compared wid material things
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Manal
2012/04/07 15:36
cmail:
mnal beyond the diamond some more mean can't compare hahaha friendship never be compared wid material things
/smileyi didnt compair my friends with materials but in deep thought it has deep meanning
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-Marizelle-
2012/04/07 15:39
My friends are pearls,diamonds,gold and silver.
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saahir
2012/04/07 16:09
mnal: well it depends,some of my friends are differents,
i have have diamond friend which is my best,
i have gold friend which is sweet,
i have silver friend which is naughty,
i have bronze friend which is 50/50 and i have copper friends which is totally useless
but still they are my friends and even the time gets old,for me they are young,and priceless/smiley
awesome
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jagadish
2012/04/07 18:38
i have mixed metal frnds. cos thay r help me to some sechuvashions/smiley hurt.cheet, fight. lof.work. so i love him.
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THE_SPEAR_KING
2012/04/07 18:47
i 2 lv my frnds.
.run.
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Amywilliam
2012/04/08 09:45
its true abt frnds how dey treat u n be der 4 u whn u need dem
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Stela
2012/04/14 18:07
Sweet poem n sweet feelings .1flowers.
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fiya
2012/04/14 18:48
Nicely put, ur friends are lucky
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cmail
2012/04/15 01:00
but my friend above all ^-^/smiley
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saahir
2012/04/16 21:45
mAnAl: well it depends,some of my friends are differents,
i have have diamond friend which is my best,
i have gold friend which is sweet,
i have silver friend which is naughty,
i have bronze friend which is 50/50 and i have copper friends which is totally useless
but still they are my friends and even the time gets old,for me they are young,and priceless/smiley
manal dear! copper frenz are good conductor.. Ha ha ha..
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saahir
2012/04/16 22:00
mAnAl: /smileyi didnt compair my friends with materials but in deep thought it has deep meanning
how much deep?
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