~I Want to Live~ by Unic0rn_GirL 2012/04/04 09:01
I want to live in your eyes
Not as a dream, but as a sight

I want to live in your mind
Not as an Idea,but as a Memory

I want to live in your heart
Not as blood,but as a beat

I want to live in your body Not as a soul, but as a feeling

I want to live in your life Not as a friend but as a "REASON OF LIVING"
Eternal_Knight 2012/04/04 09:11
Thats is so sweet.. I ll dedicate it to someone soon. .
Hkhan 2012/04/04 09:12
All nice one except 2nd last-up-
Dumbledore 2012/04/04 09:15
I want 2 be in ur tea, nt as d sugar but as d taste /smiley nice topic
GhAyAl 2012/04/04 09:19
Me + you = we

Live together
SoftwareboY 2012/04/04 09:23
Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. /smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? /smiley just asking,yano curiosity.../smiley
abi_simple 2012/04/04 09:25
awesome!!
Fluxion 2012/04/04 09:26
gud last lane /smiley
saahir 2012/04/04 10:04
Beautiful poem, words emerged from ur own heart, so sweet, keep it on.
Unic0rn_GirL 2012/04/04 11:58
Thanks frenz for ur warm coments /smiley
Unic0rn_GirL 2012/04/04 12:00
Quote: softwareboy: Your own poem? Really? Btw its nice. /smiley So if you wrote this,who was in your minda actually? /smiley just asking,yano curiosity.../smiley


Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor /smiley
S3RIAL_KILL3R 2012/04/04 16:39
nice topic.
SoftwareboY 2012/04/04 17:35
Quote: Unic0rn_GirL:

Yea actually therz two in my mind superstar salman khan & ranvir kapoor /smiley


-lmao- that's cool. I appreciate /smiley
KingFISHER 2012/04/05 04:48
Awsome!
metalchris 2012/04/05 08:26
Awesome peom and toothsomely heart touching...luv it/smiley/smiley
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